Say the Last Goodbye - Comments

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I am absolutely in love with Synyster Gates/Brain. So I was so excited to read this story. The color of the text and the background made it kind of hard to read. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes so good job on that. The characters are relatable and the plot is very exciting. Katie is probably my favorite character. Keep up the good work.

awesome finally got t catch up can't wait for more.

comment swap brought me here. I read the first chapter. I didn't like the layout -.- clashed with my eyes but don't change it just because I didn't like it. I usually don't bother with the layout critism. I liked what I read so far. Your characters are easy to imagine like they're real people. Unable to find too many spelling mistakes or anything like that, mainly because I have a bit of dislexia but anywho. I think you've done a great job so far and I'm keen to read more!

Comment swap has brought me upon your fanfiction. Can I just say that I laughed when I saw Tanya's picture (is that her name)? I'm not sure why but I did. Due to lack of time though, I wasn't able to get past the first chapter. I'm sorry. Still, it seems you're a great writer so keep it up.

The story is very good!
The lime green font is a little hard to read on the white background, but the rest of the layout is simple and nice.
I love your characters, they're relatable and believable.
The story plot is very good and exciting.
Your spelling and grammar is flawless, which is wonderful.
I can't wait for the next update!

I am from comment swap...again...they sent em to the same story...i guesss i didn't have enough characters.

Anyway...the same thing still stands: This story is very exciting. It wouldn't hurt to add more details. You have been doing a great job with them. so great work! =)

The characters should porbably be a bit more detailed. There may be a reader who doesn't know who these people are.

great job over all! keep it up!

Just read the whole story in less than an hour. Update frequently for my sake lol

I am from commetn swap as well...

I agree wwith Dark Romance....It is very exciting. Details and descriptions are very nicely done but you could always use more of them.

I would also develop the chracters alittle more, Other than that, good job!!!

I'm here from comment swap.

Your story is very exciting. It's high in sexual tension and the characters are very interesting and entertaining. I can't wait for what is going to happen next. Your use of words is also not bad. You could use a little more description and some practice but hey, in all this is a really good job.

I really feel for Katie, she is a great character and I can completely relate to her in the way you wrote the chapter. I lived through her and it was so sad and heart gripping. Really good good on getting a emotional reaction.

Sooo.... I started reading and I'm hooked. So totally hope you start updating again soon!

so excited to see you update
glad your back
awesome update can't wait for more

pretty please update i really really really want more :)

awesome more soon :)

damn i feel bad for Katie =(

so happy you update
poor katie
more soon

love this story
hope you get a chance to update

a miscarriage that was so sad this chapter was so sad

o noz how sad

you get better you need to be healthy to fill my need for synyster gates sexy moments

how dare you cut me off?