Meant to Be - Comments

I have the chapters mixed up, but I hope you know what I'm talking about =^_^=
Update 6 is really good :)

By the way... Is Tyler really a girl or female? ._.
I'm still confused as to what Tyler's gender is ._.

And those boys.. AKSJDLKA. I want to punch them and I agree with Robin's remark :P
I like Robin. She's cool :D Like... The random person who turns out to be cool..

Then.. Towards the end.. The kind stranger? I have a gut feeling of something bad..
But hopefully it's wrong :) Wonderful update ^^

I.. You're amazing. One of the best writers I've encountered on this site.
I love how you write and I love how you choose words.
I was a bit confused about Tyler's gender. At first, I thought Tyler was female,
but I think Ch.4 made it clear he's male.. Right? Or am I wrong? ._.

Anywho, no mistakes from what I've read and I'm loving the story.
Short and straight to the point~

lol@Ch.3
I love how Robin and Tyler meet :)
And how Tyler was smart enough to con the family. Walter should be so grateful :P

also, another lol@Ch.5 XD

i adore this story. <3
it's really interesting and i'm pretty intrigued by your half-crazy narrator but i love it. :D
i love robin, though. she's a total badass, i'm pretty sure. :D

Love! *subs*

...he licked her tits. ._. HE LICKED HER GODDAMN MOTHERFUCKING TITS.

DDD: Well looks like there's a lot more to Robin than I originally thought. This half of a chapter explained more about her character, but there's still some definite mystery that I can't wait to find out. :D

Keep it up, wifey. Even if I beat you senseless. :cute:

Robin sounds like some crazy shit, yo. It'd be fun to meet her irl and see what she does. >_> Yenno, just for kicks.

This update was gold, wifey. Really, you've got some serious game. The reason why Robin seemed like such hot stuff was because you made her sound so hardcore. I love how you're able to make descriptions of characters without directly saying so. I'm jealous.

And sorry for not commenting earlier, goddamn meebz didn't tell me you did. T_T

i love love love this, PLEASE UPDATE?!!

CONTINUE. Please?
This is amazing.

O_O Dear lawd.

LOLOLOLOLOL OH MY JESUS WTH ERIN.
This made me lolirl because it was so weird. XDD I loved the part where Tyler first gets punched, I love reading/watching/hearing about people being in pain.

Can't wait for more. ^_________^

She's a smart girl! lol She got away with a lot of money there.

"I'm too old and too tired to cook dinner. I want pancakes," she said, her cigarette bouncing along with her lips as she spoke.

Reminds me of my grandmother.

She kicked off her slippers and watched Jeopardy on cable, kicked back in her suede La-Z-Boy chair.

Reminds me of my other grandmother.

"Pancakes?" Old and tired my ass. She's thirty two, but she can pass for fifty six.

My mother, because she's always the one making pancakes--at whatever time it may be--for me and everyone else, whenever the hell we ask for them.

"Did I stutter?" she asked, not taking her eyes away from the television.

Now that, my dear wife, reminds me of a bitch who can't really be fucked to get off her lazy ass to make herself food, therefore creating headaches for the close relatives for her own enjoyment. Also known as me thirty years from now.

I love this. I have no idea where this is going yet, but I love it. And I'm absolutely delighted that Aunt Jemima exists in the wonderful land of Detroit, I wasn't sure if it was international. Like IHOP or 7-Eleven.

Your words and descriptions and sarcastic sense of humour makes me (unlike most of the stupid crap written on meebz) laugh irl. The character you've created for Tyler is almost a mirror image of what my cousin is like, which makes me think that you secretly know exactly where I live (even though you know my address) and who my relatives are and what they say to me to make me cry.

Anyway. I'll subscribe to this, so I can see where you'll take me down memory lane. I love your face. Keep it up.

Woot...I like this so far. *subscribes*

It sounds like it's going to be terrific.