Ahaha we'll see =] If I continue to have awesome readers like you, I just might go for it. I'll have to plan it out really well, though -- I definitely want it to be just as good (if not better) than the original ^^
It doesn't matter if you post on your own comments board for your stories. I prefer commenting the reader personally, but if you like commenting here, it's yours so it doesn't matter!
I think the whole thing in it's entirety was grand. The chapters moved along swiftly but nothing was awkward. I think Alex cheated on her but didn't want to come to turns with it - again, that's just me and assumptions talking. ^.^;
The ending was great. Told you I wouldn't be disappointed. And I agree, I liked the story because of the ending.(: I'm left thinking if she leaves or not, so maybe write a sequel? *wiggles eyebrows* How about it? :P
Am I supposed to post on the message boards of my own stories? Is this like, politically incorrect, in some way? Ah, screw it. So, what did you think? And you should definitely watch the movie =] It has Meryl Streep, Amy Adams, and Philip Seymour Hoffman in it. By far, the best movie of 2008/9.
Don't DOUBT your story (; Honestly, it's good. I've never seen the movie it's inspired by though 3: It's probably really great considering how good this story is..
Anyways, you incorporated some pretty legit stuff. Like, the ex-girlfriend thing? Genius. Now I want to know how this ends... Hopefully it's good. Like really good. Otherwise I'll be disappointed 3: JUST KIDDING. I love all endings, happy, sad, stupid, funny. All 'o them. (:
You did not just .. - No. I refuse to believe it. Alex did not cheat, Rian is lying, and this will not be a short story. You can't just do that to .. - No. I am still refusing. :[
I mean, it's amazing but .. - sadness much? Honestly, Rian doesn't even know what's she's going through right now! And to just blurt that out so bluntly? That's not good. It's not going to end good.
I believe your title might be the problem to no one reading this. It's not that it's bad, it just doesn't attract many others, I presume. But in truth: this is fabulous.
I haven't read an introduction so long-winded, yet so short in a very long time. Usually, introductions delve into the story, but you didn't quite yet. I'm a sucker for you type of writers.
The way you described basically two words is fabulous and you definitely leave me wanting more. Thus, the subscription happens right now. ♥
This might be formal to you, but that's how all my first-time comments are. Don't expect them like this - that's just a heads up.