You're a great writer :) it's easy to read but still literate and detailed and all that. Just wanted to let you know though, "bloke" isn't an insult, it's just another word for "man" or "guy" :)
Lovely ending. The way Oli was fussing over everything was quite hilarious. It's adorable that he cared so much. In other news it was great to see that Tom got his happy ending.
Aww. Things are finally turning around for Tom. His IM conversation with Violet was adorable, and I can't wait to find out what happens when they meet at the park.
Sorry I haven't commented. I've been totally swamped with work, but I caught up! Oli is getting a lot of shit in this story. And Tom isn't having much luck either. Haha Keep 'em coming! I promise my comment will be promt next time, and not so rushed!
And the truth finally comes out. Although I wish it hadn't happened so dramatically, at least Tom knows that Oli isn't going behind his back. Not quite sure how they're going to work past this, but I'm positive that you'll make it interesting.