Better Off As Lovers. - Comments

The last sentence... It killed me.
Awesome.

You have no idea how much I 'awww-ed' at this! Especially, the part where Jack asks Alex if he

wants to play Lego with him both at the start and at the end :3

I love how descriptive this one shot is and yep, there is no denying it, you have a bucket-load of

writing talent, so never give up, because if you do, I shall be sad and cry - you wouldn't want that...

would you?!

Amazing jobs, Dibs :3 <3

Awwww.

I love how it goes full circle, and just the description/timeline thing is really nice, if that makes sense.

This is really sweet. <3

Awwww :D
Oh my God, the ending was the cutest thing since bread.
<333333

Awh this was so sweet and awesome! I love the way you described the evolution of their relationship, and the last line was so so cute!
So yeah, great job!

I swear I have read this before! I clicked on it and I got excited because I am was like OMG I have read this and it was amazing <3
I love the last line, I think thats my favortie :D
I lvoe the whole plot as well :D

“Hi! My name is Jack. Do you want to play Lego with me?”
*squeals and grins like an idiot*
i lovelovelove it!
:)

awww, that was so sweet... I loved the ending

Aww! This is such a lovely story! It made me cry XD
<3
xx

That was so sweet<3

Aww, this was so sweet, I really love it!
You should definitely post more Jalex soon and let me know when you do, it's awesome and your writing style is amazing!

You have no comments!! That...is so wrong. You need to have comments for this. This was amazing!!! I really loved it :D. It was so cute and I absolutley adored the ending. It made me giggle. Thank you for this beyond amazing, wonderfully written one-shot that just made my day!