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  • AllTimeLoverJess

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    The last sentence... It killed me.
    Awesome.
    May 4th, 2012 at 04:46am
  • Dean Winchester;

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    You have no idea how much I 'awww-ed' at this! Especially, the part where Jack asks Alex if he

    wants to play Lego with him both at the start and at the end :3

    I love how descriptive this one shot is and yep, there is no denying it, you have a bucket-load of

    writing talent, so never give up, because if you do, I shall be sad and cry - you wouldn't want that...

    would you?!

    Amazing jobs, Dibs :3 <3
    February 11th, 2012 at 02:42am
  • hang you up.

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    Awwww.

    I love how it goes full circle, and just the description/timeline thing is really nice, if that makes sense.

    This is really sweet. <3
    November 28th, 2010 at 12:16am
  • In A City Of Fools

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    Awwww :D
    Oh my God, the ending was the cutest thing since bread.
    <333333
    July 18th, 2010 at 04:03pm
  • QuirkyAnecdote

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    Awh this was so sweet and awesome! I love the way you described the evolution of their relationship, and the last line was so so cute!
    So yeah, great job!
    June 11th, 2010 at 12:59am
  • Fangs Up.

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    I swear I have read this before! I clicked on it and I got excited because I am was like OMG I have read this and it was amazing <3
    I love the last line, I think thats my favortie :D
    I lvoe the whole plot as well :D
    April 27th, 2010 at 06:48pm
  • janabelle_xo

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    “Hi! My name is Jack. Do you want to play Lego with me?”
    *squeals and grins like an idiot*
    i lovelovelove it!
    :)
    March 28th, 2010 at 10:46am
  • amberisariot

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    awww, that was so sweet... I loved the ending
    February 25th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • FUN GHOUL

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    Aww! This is such a lovely story! It made me cry XD
    <3
    xx
    February 25th, 2010 at 05:15pm
  • Kelllin Quinn

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    That was so sweet<3
    February 22nd, 2010 at 06:19am
  • LottieNightmare

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    Aww, this was so sweet, I really love it!
    You should definitely post more Jalex soon and let me know when you do, it's awesome and your writing style is amazing!
    February 21st, 2010 at 08:41pm
  • xmydecemberx

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    You have no comments!! That...is so wrong. You need to have comments for this. This was amazing!!! I really loved it :D. It was so cute and I absolutley adored the ending. It made me giggle. Thank you for this beyond amazing, wonderfully written one-shot that just made my day!
    February 21st, 2010 at 08:15pm
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