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  • Emilise284

    Emilise284 (100)

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    I love it, but I think it would be better if you used apostrophes and commas properly. I like the idea of all these stories coming together as one, and that Edward is suspicous of them.
    June 10th, 2010 at 03:51am
  • ASeventhHorcrux

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    I like it, why doesn't Edward like them? hmmm
    May 28th, 2010 at 04:05am
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