oldDear God - Comments

My god. When I clicked on this story and there was only one chapter, I freaked out like hell. But then after reading the chapter it made me feel all relaxed again 'cos reading does that to me o_O.
Anyways, and then I saw the Author's Note, you have no idea how relived I was xD. I thought all the other chapters just got deleted or something.

So yes, I can tell this plot is going to be more exiting than the other ;D.

I'm totally cool with whether Jersey should be in this or not, but it would make the story more, as you say, 'real'. ^^

My favourite song off of Nightmare.. probably Victim or Fiction.

This comment is too long.. forgive me, yus? :D
xxx

I'm confused.
So like, you rewrote this?

WHERE THE FUCK WAS I?!
Now I can't get a taste of the old story, boo.

But hey! Update soon because this apperently new first chapter is fllllllllly!
XD

Jersey = HELL YES!
Favorite song as of now... Victim.

what?! that douche! why would someone do that?! >:|

Anywhoo I love it! update soonn.

:D
(where was she? I couldn't find her. -,.-)

okay a few things
1. love the new plotline, it is better than the other
2. i teared a little on so far away too
3. they did aknowledge leana, right Diony Sepulveda (who ever that it) its written on the 7th line
so yeah all in all great story. cant wait for more

WHAT HAPPENED?!?! *waves arms hysterically*

Wait...I'll calm down.
I'm going to accept this. I'm going to see how it goes.
But you're an amazing writer.

I'm sure even if you started over every five chapters, I'd still be a loyal reader <3

I would totally keep Jersey in. Even if you don't have Matt acting like a jerk in this version, he could still bring in a little bit of drama.

KEEP JERSEY KEEP JERSEY!!!!!

aww, ur previous one was growing on me:(... is Jimmy still gonna be a ghost character?? please!!!:)
eeeeek.... Paige's mom's a weight freak!! >.<

AND KEEP JERSEY! HE IS SMEXYY! ;}

Wait so her step dad is named Carmen? ... thats interesting ;\
and whats up with her mom and the FOod thing! Now i feel fat D: Poo hER!
But love the chapter tho :}

and keep Jersey!!!!!

i cried at the song Fiction. literally balling my eyes out because i wasn't paying attention and it heat me full force.

Yes you should keep Jersey
This got wat more interesting :D
Can't wait to read the rest

I like how you restarted it.
It's a LOT more interesting XD
I can't wait to see how you add the A7X characters into it.
Please update soon.

You should totally keep Jersey!
I love his character!(:
Her moms still a bitch..
._.

KEEP JERSEY!!!!!

Okay, I never the update about Jersey.
But if he's better than Matt then you should keep in there.
Anyways, I love how it is more than I did before.
Update soon and I'll attempt to update our story soon as well. lol

You totally have to keep Jersey! He would be amazing for her :)

Yay! It's up again.
Nice dramatic opening ;)
More please! <3
Xoxo. Tina.

dude they so did put leana in the acknowledgments! she's like in the middle

and i lovel ove love this now, not that i didn't love it before.