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I hate the Jonas brothers.
But this fan fic was so beautiful <3
You have a way with words.

Aww, that was so bittersweet.

Oh, wow.
This was really good.
Heart breaking, of course. Cancer is never a good thing, but it was so poetic.
Beautiful, in a sick and twisted way.

That was so amazing and so sweet :) It was very well-written and amazing, keep up the great work!

[font=3Omg, I just teared up so much!
I loved it, probably one of the best I've every read for a Joe One Shot.
This is fantastic.

I would like to say that I once liked the Jonas Brothers, but not so much anymore.
However I gave this story a shot and I'm glad I did.
Really cute story and it very well written.
Great job on it, keep up the awesome work!

^ there's a reason that girl is one of my best friends. ;D
Thank you, Alu.

tragedy on rewind. said everything (:

He was her lifeline, her anchor, the hand that kept her head above water.

Really well written.

Also, I really liked the ending, it was really sad and surreal to read.

This was beautiful. The last sentence really got me.

Oh, and your font should be a bit bigger to help contrast with the background color of your layout, but other than these comments I really can't say much else.

I'm the first to admit that I'm not a fan of the Jonas Bros, and that's only my opinion, but this story was so moving that I forgot that this Jonas WAS a Jonas. I just visualized a boy going through something terrible, and THAT'S when you know your story is good, because you get people to see past their preconceptions.
Excellent job, have a cookie.

That was beautiful! I loved the way it was written and the fact that I really didn't know who the guy was until the letter. I mean, I even thought she was going to kill herself. You completely turned that around and surprised me by saying it was cancer that was killing her. I love it when writers do that!

That? Was depressing.
But written amazingly well.
Great job. ;]

One Shot for One Shot

Firstly, I don't like the Jonas Brothers but simply adored this.
This is probably the most heart-warming stories I've read on here.
It was amazing.

There were very few errors that did not take away from the piece at all, so don't worry.

The way you captured cancer in this was just so realistic and it felt like I was watching a movie.
Madeline and Joe acted perfectly for what was happening, totally how I'd imagine two people in the same situation in real life.

The letter was brilliant, if I was capable of crying I would have been.

Great job.

Well then I guess that's a comment greater than any of other I could get. I'm sorry about your family members. I'm glad I managed that alright, thank you!

Wow, you really captured the essence of cancer. I had three family members suffer from it, and it does feel as if death is getting closer everyday. Other than that, great word choice and great structure. It was very sweet, and the letter made me want to cry.

Aw, thats a compliment and a half. Thank you so much ! :D
I'm seriously in love with you guys, you are the greatest.

the greatest!

Honestly, I hate the JoBros.
But I thought I'd give it a chance, only because I really loved that last story.

This....made me sad.
I don't cry for humans[only dogs lol] but if I did, I would cry.
It was written wonderfully.
A great plotline mixed with a great author and huzzah, this.. :]

:O

This story is sooooo sad! OMFG!!!!

*sob*