Lawn Boy - Comments

can't wait to read more

loved it

awwwww, I loved it

loved it

I feel bad for both of them, I hope they make things work out

I like it :)

Whattaturd.

I liked that chapter. I hate in stories when someone cheats on their partner and their partner takes them back as if it means nothing. Its good how you have made it a big deal, its so much more realistic. I hope they get back together though.

keep writing :)
~Katie

Andrew...just so you know, you're missing like a sentence or something from this. After Max gets in the car to go home after school. A sentence stops with da.

Duuude you're pretty awesome

When are we going to get an update?

Poor Ash, D:

I so hope that they make up and things are okay

What the fuck!
That's not okay!

Well shit. He's screwed.
I love this, by the way XD

i love max but he's acting like a real dick right now. update soon ^_^

damn, he messed up pretty bad, can't wait to read more

oh shit..........

Okay, i read this whole story in two hours. It was AWESOME. You should totally have it published when finished. update ASAP.

really good