Blood, Sweat and Slash. - Comments

Not only good writing, but a good story line woderfully painted immage . god damn I cried . My eyeliner ran a little, this was breath taking no words can match

I hope the rapeist burn in hell and brendon and ryan make sweet love in heaven. OMG I think I'm about to cry this can achally happen in real life thats the sad thing and also a world with out ryden is like a world without candy nooooooooo! but good story anyways

Holy shit!! that was a really good story .
it was really cute, i liked it alot :)
but..why did you have to kill them ? :( Pfftt rude <3
lmao, good job (Y):) i cried a little <3

It's like a freakin train wreck! now let me make that something you will like. I say it is like a train wreck because it is morbidly beautiful. i couldn't stop reading it cause it caught me with the blood and held me with it's words. I couldn't look away no matter how bloody it got. I hold myself up there with the sick and morbid and twisted and honey you are with me. I love it. It is wonderfully composed and i love what you did with it.

I love it! Horrible, but amazing!
My friend and I read this in our science class and no one could understaand why we were crying like babies!
Absolutely amazing!

*tears*
I'm crying like a baby here.
D: I love it, but at the same time I reap for the fictional lost souls! D:
AS cheesy and dumb as that sounds *cough cough*

Fuck that's depressing. Written well but bloody depressing. God.
If they hadn't been killed it may have been less depressing but it is good.
I need to stop saying depressing now.

expected it to be all fluff like all the Rydon I come across.... I was wrong
O_O very well composed though <3 XD

I agree with Reddielove. That was just sick and horrible. Sorry

Being honest, worst thing I have never read :/

Sorry, my opinion. The story was just down right depressing, and I hated the writing, it was hard to read.... I had to keep rereading (All the sick crap) To understand if we were reading through Ryan, Brendon. The very ending was to short, and blunt for my liking.

All and all... it didn't seem like I was reading a story/book. Seemed like I was reading just some really sick crap, all put together, and called a ''Story''

Pff. That is just my opinion though.
-Reddie

Well written.

Oh my God.
Oh... my... God.
I think I teared up a bit. ;~;

Oh my god.
I can't understand why I loved this so much. It was extremely well written though it's a bit worrying that you managed to come up with this.
I loved the ~semi-ending, when they were trying to ease each other's pain. Then the actual ending made me scream, then cry.
Really good story even though the thought will probably infect my thoughts for a good few days.
<3

:'( So you made me cry like a baby... thanks for that one :L
I love this in a disgusting way. It was so sad but yet so cute.
I CANT BELIEVED THEY DIED!
:'( “Ryan please!” he sobbed. Brendon was in so much agony That line effected me most... :'(

Sorry ima stop rambling and stop telling you how upset I am up :L
I like it, it's well written XD

oh God. I do not know what to say.
It was great, sure. I really loved it.
They both ended up dead, which was sad.
But it was refreshing too to read a non cliche story.
Well done. It was great!

woah, that was just...wow. i could see it all perfectly. amazing imagery and descriptions of the sounds. i loved it!

Whoa, that was intense...

Great story.
Disgusting...but cute in an odd way.

Shitt. Dead on. Pshhh. Great story anyway! :D

You are a sick, twisted person!

Though that was very well written.

And kinda cute in a... disgusting kinda way :)