One Simple Fuck - Comments

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just be with Alex and Alex only already!!!
Impatient Kayti is impatient.
Loved the chapter. More soon.

-kayt

I've missed this. Glad to see an update. I'll be waiting for the next

Cassie.:

Oh my fucking God, this story is perfect. You are perfect in my mind right now. I love this so much. I am now going to read everything you've written and become obsessed with your stories and you'll get annoyed because I'll comment on everything, and I'm sorry but you are great. Just great.

HAHAHAHA! ^^^ Made my day.
Go for it. :) Read away.
Thank you. You're prety perfect yourself :)

Sunny-Lee <3

Oh my fucking God, this story is perfect. You are perfect in my mind right now. I love this so much. I am now going to read everything you've written and become obsessed with your stories and you'll get annoyed because I'll comment on everything, and I'm sorry but you are great. Just great.

NerdGlasses:

honestly you're the best fucking writer around here, not only have i read 'issues of seduction' and 'one simple fuck' but now i recently i have started reading 'scream to be heard' and i have fallen in love all over again. i'm not done with that on yet, 70 chapters take up quite a while but i hope you'll update this one soon cause i enjoy the pregnancy situation so much

Thank you :) I'm glad you think so! Although I'm sure there are more talented people. You just have to find them :)
Glad you're reading my 3 favourite fan fictions. They're all still active because I haven't decided an ending to any of them. If you're into Original Fiction, I suggest you read my story "Grey Wolf Mountain" which is complete, and I'm in the process of writing a sequel :)

Sunny-Lee <3

honestly you're the best fucking writer around here, not only have i read 'issues of seduction' and 'one simple fuck' but now i recently i have started reading 'scream to be heard' and i have fallen in love all over again. i'm not done with that on yet, 70 chapters take up quite a while but i hope you'll update this one soon cause i enjoy the pregnancy situation so much

ohhh my god! please don't ever stop this story.. i love it i always look forward to reading the new chapters. post sson please<3

I really don't like her and Matt together but I love the story and her friendship/relationship with Alex is adorable

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't stop this story!!! You are an AMAZING writer! Out of a hundred authors on mibba with good potential storie, I can honestly say that you are the BEST!!!! I love it, keep it up!

RedrumIsMurder:

This story,,just,,,ugh. It brings out so many fucking emotions in me, I actually feel like a pregnant woman -_-
I'm going to rant now. You ready?
Leila is being so completely and utterly stupid. She said herself, she chose Matt over Alex. She made that desision to walk away from whatever relationship they could of had. I understand why she did it, but she can't then turn round and be mad at Alex for sleeping with someone else, when she's been sleeping with Matt and rubbing it in his face. I can't believe she was going to keep Alex out of the kids life, and lie and say Matt was the father. She can't be mad at Alex, because the whole thing is just as much her fault as it is his, so she can't pour all the blame on him. She knew perfectly well that he had a girlfriend.
Also, Matt's being a dick too. He knows that Alex is the babies dad, so he should just accept that and stop trying to push him out.
Alex well Alex needs to grow some balls and stand up to her. She treats him like shit and he just takes it, and forgives her. Ugh.

I've never ranted about a story like that in the whole time I've been on Mibba, which is at least 3 years. That must say something about how good your writing is, if you can bring out that kind of emotion from me (:
It might not seem like it, because of the way this comment turned out, but I actually love this, in a really strange way.
I hope you update soon.

No, I definitely LOVE when people rant. I kind of think that Leila's super confused about everything. Like, you know when you WANT something, and yet you know something else is better for you? So that's what she's doing there with the Matt/Alex situation. But I totally agree that she's going about it the wrong way. I WOULD fix her and make her perfect, but that ruins the whole idea that she's a person and not a robot. So I like her this way, but I'd be yelling at her if I were her friend. lol.

I don't think Matt's pushing Alex out? Except in the doctor's office... they kind of have a rivalry in there.

Agreed. I find that everyone needs to grow up and stand up to Leila, just because she's pregnant doesn't mean she's going to do something drastic like attack them with a knife. The worst they'll get is her crying or yelling. lol.

I'm glad I bring out emotions for you through my writing. :D I'm also glad you love this...in a strange way :D

Sunny-Lee <3

aswbutterfly17:

AHHH I LOVE THISSSS :)
and to answer your question: the only spelling thing i found was in the ninth paragraph (yes, I counted) and it says "...the dad cam..." when it should be "...the dad can..." (When Evan and Leila are talking, if that helps...)
please post more soon!!!!

Thanks! I'm glad you love it!
Also, fixed that spelling :) You're so helpful :D
Sunny-Lee <3

This story,,just,,,ugh. It brings out so many fucking emotions in me, I actually feel like a pregnant woman -_-
I'm going to rant now. You ready?
Leila is being so completely and utterly stupid. She said herself, she chose Matt over Alex. She made that desision to walk away from whatever relationship they could of had. I understand why she did it, but she can't then turn round and be mad at Alex for sleeping with someone else, when she's been sleeping with Matt and rubbing it in his face. I can't believe she was going to keep Alex out of the kids life, and lie and say Matt was the father. She can't be mad at Alex, because the whole thing is just as much her fault as it is his, so she can't pour all the blame on him. She knew perfectly well that he had a girlfriend.
Also, Matt's being a dick too. He knows that Alex is the babies dad, so he should just accept that and stop trying to push him out.
Alex well Alex needs to grow some balls and stand up to her. She treats him like shit and he just takes it, and forgives her. Ugh.

I've never ranted about a story like that in the whole time I've been on Mibba, which is at least 3 years. That must say something about how good your writing is, if you can bring out that kind of emotion from me (:
It might not seem like it, because of the way this comment turned out, but I actually love this, in a really strange way.
I hope you update soon.

Glad to see that you're updating again! I've missed this story. I can't help but want Alex and Leila together... but I dunno. Matt's so nice to her. Well whatever happens I'm sure it'll be great. Update soon!

Glad to see that you're updating again! I've missed this story. I can't help but want Alex and Leila together... but I dunno. Matt's so nice to her. Well whatever happens I'm sure it'll be great. Update soon!

AHHH I LOVE THISSSS :)
and to answer your question: the only spelling thing i found was in the ninth paragraph (yes, I counted) and it says "...the dad cam..." when it should be "...the dad can..." (When Evan and Leila are talking, if that helps...)
please post more soon!!!!

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I can't even.
I just want them together so freaking bad! D:

-kayt

i miss this story, please update again soon

I just started reading, great story. However, Leilah is stringing Matt

Make it a girl! So she can be wraped around Alex's finger! hehehehe Daddy's Little Girl! Or you could do a boy and girl! TWINS! btw Love your storys!!!!!!!!!!

glitter on the floor:

Leila really annoys me.
Just saying hahaha.
Can't wait for more :]

Leila annoys a lot of people... I kind of like her. lol. So I'm not sure why everyone doesn't, except because she refuses to be with Alex.
Maybe it's cause she's kinda a bitch?
Sunny-Lee <3