It Matters - Comments

First off, I just have to say, what a fucking brilliant concept. Seriously. I am...I hate you for thinking of it and not me XD Honestly. You took the idea of a band being a religion and basically showed us the penalty. It's how it is right now, isn't it? Not to the degree of full fledged war or anything, but there are people who act like...if you don't look or act or dress a certain way, you can't like a specific band. Or you are inferior for liking a band that is of a a different genre or such. Great concept. And the ending like was fantastic "why can't I like them all?" Brilliant.

I do have some concrit though. I feel like it was a little rushed, so the feel of the army and the impending death came slightly too quickly. I would have liked to see more of a build up. And it seemed like you jumped from one idea to another, without any warning. First it seemed like you wanted the MCR army to invade the last two standing armies, but instead it went to those mother and daughter on death row. There should have been more of a bridge to tie to two- or atleast just stick with one throughout the whole story, you know.

Other than that, it was brilliant, I really enjoyed it.

I'll definitely be subscribing.
I tend to like satire, and this is really good.

This deserves to be continued, it is so original and well written.
As with all the people above, I can relate to the main character.
I wouldn't want to choose.

oh. my. god!
that was just mind blowing.
the suspence was amazing.
please write more Gi.
or else.

XD

Dude. I freaking loved it.
It's like Mibba gone badass.
Or something.
Sorry.
It's late.
I'm tired.
And talking like a teenie.
Anyway.
Can't wait for chapter 2.
=]

Wonderful, strangely moving. Can't wait for more!

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Wow, that's just really touching; knowing that I love more than one of those and I wouldn't be able to choose, I feel attactched to this character.
xoxo

I feel the same attactchment, and not just because she does have my name.

It was truly touching, Gi. I loved every word of it. Even though you said it was a one shot, I really think you could do magnificient work if came to be a full out story. You would be the only one that could write it, and I hope you do.

If not, so be it. At least we got this.

Love it, once more.

This is really good.
Wow, if this was real though, I'd be dead. I love The Used and MCR.
Very interesting plot, I really hope it doesn't become a reality though.
Makes sense though; unfortuantely I can see this happening."But ma'," Katie whispered, turning to her mother with teary eyes, "What if I just like them all?"

Wow, that's just really touching; knowing that I love more than one of those and I wouldn't be able to choose, I feel attactched to this character.
Great start.
More when you can. [:
xoxo