I really enjoyed reading it so far and I can't wait for the sequel, I have literally just seen the Dark Night Rises so I'm pretty pumped on anything Batman related right now! I enjoyed the plot. And I can't express how much I like Sparrow, the whole double personality is a good idea! I hope you keep writing!
Yay! My day was rather dull, but getting an update for this story was great compensation! I still love it!!!! And regarding your authors note -raises hand- Can't wait to read more, keep it up! ^_^
Well, it's a nice concept and idea. I like how the main girl is a killer; have to love that :) well, I'm not quite a big fan of batman and joker, and the super hero versus villain kind of thing, but you did a good job :)
Comment swap brought me to this story! Batman is the only DC character who and whose stories have captured my interest. (Marvel is more of my cup 'o tea, though.) Although I'm not really a huge fan of Joker stories (as I'm more of a hero fan myself), The Joker in all honesty is my favorite villain in any comic book. I love how you capture his madness and shape Sparrow's/Raven's madness as well. It's very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Keep writing!
I suggest you re-read your chapters and check for grammar errors, there aren't many but a few letters are flipped around, making it a little harder to read.
I love how you project Raven/Sparrow, I also love how you project the crazy.
Hey, I'm from comment swap :) I'm super tired so I just read the prologue, but I already like the concept and I adore your writing style! You have no grammar or spelling mistakes and this story is pretty perfect so far. Keep up the good work :)