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This is good, and its really cute but I'd suggest spacing the paragraphs a little bit.
Other than that, I really enjoyed this. :)

June 1st, 2010 at 05:38pm
Lilith_Darkmind (100)

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This is really good....
But the problem is it's notl ong enough. It had to be at least 600 words...

February 23rd, 2010 at 10:23pm

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