Mile High - Comments

update soon i hope?

I'm going to be annoying and write a long comment. >:]

So I just wanted to say I laughed at this bit too: She seemed to think that I'd like to smell like a woman since I was gay. :')

And this, this part made me smile for a reason I don't even know: 'Alright, sir. Ticket please.' The lady at the desk asked, a tired smile on her lips. I could sympathize with her. I wanted more sleep too.

Oh and this: Gripping my suitcase handle, I walked into the line behind a very pretty woman with a flower in her hair and a pretty outrageous outfit. Saying it was colorful was an understatement, she would’ve put a fucking rainbow to shame. - that made me smile too. I laughed, because I just pictured the craziest lady in the craziest outfit. xD But then I kept reading and I really liked the way she was described - it made me smile. Sounds lame, but she sounded real and just sweet. And I liked that :]

Oh and lastly - the texts Frank got were amusing too. xD Ahaha, good old Barb!

Other than that... I did notice there were a few grammatical/spelling errors in this but I don't want to seem bitchy by pointing them out. aha. So yeahhh. Also, I think the sex was~ written a bit awkwardly but I like the way there could be promise to this story so, you know, I hope you guys do end up continuing with this. :]

Ahahaha, I have to say I laughed out loud at this part in the second chapter: She jogged up to me, her large breasts bouncing as she wore no bra. She never did. There was a rumor that she wanted my attention or, to be more specific, me inside her.

-- That and the description of her blonde hair as 'ratty'. Awesome.

Oh man. :') *continues reading*

I like the ending of the last chapter where he thinks it is too bad that they fucked :P
That was pretty sweet.

Since you have someone who wants to write Frankie's part, that's cool, and I wouldn't mind helping by just being someone you guys could talk to and get to read what you wrote or help you brainstorm if you want that. Or to run ideas past, or spell check, help with description, whatever you want k? :)

Dude I freaking love this; I'm willing to help out with Frankies part. :D

Cool! update sooon?

update soon? I love it, can't wait for more!!!!

ah, i just read this story and i really like it..i hope you both continue to write it

Like this.
So much.

ha ha they had sex in the bathroom thousands of miles in the air :) wait did the plane even take off yet? whatever they had sex in a bathroom on a plane only knowing each other for like ten minutes i loved it :D

I understand you. I feel a little awkward too while writting anything realated to sex, but it was actually very good. Update soon please, I'm curious.

haha that was awesome :'D

I think I died and went to heaven. Amazing update! Can't wait for more. If you want me to I could do some story whoring for you.

Dudes! I effing love this already. If you want I could make you a layout. It's up to you. anyways. Can't wait until the next chapter! *subscribes.*