This was like movie-ish. lmfao. the like present time, and what happened before. idk it felt like a movie. and i loved it <3 you should be quite proud of yourself right now!
I'm gonna be honest so please don't be mad.I really like this story, I like that the Jonas Brothers are getting some before they get married cause it shows they are human. I don't think the chapter where she's talking about doing lines of coke and stuff is realistic, the cutting is, but this stuff is real, and serious. So if you are going to go down this road of making Jude (Jen's) character a person who cuts, or does drugs follow it through. Will Joe make her quit the drugs, or the help her stop cutting. Originally I was gonna say I hate it it's stupid but, I think it could make things more interesting...I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just trying to help you become a stronger writer. I'll shut up
AGHH omg you need to hush about your chapters being fillers or sucky because every single one of them was fantastic this is just so scandalous for the jonas brothers and i love it absolutely love it im so happy you won the contest and had me read this 'cause its great! update soon!