Picture Perfect. - Comments

I still love this fic, and I can be honest and tell you that I've read it at least seventy / hundred times

now :D

It brings a smile to my face to read it and be able to think back to the show where he posed for my

camera (sucks that we didn't actually see each other in a McDonalds but...that doesn't matter!)

Jack Barakat is an absolute sweetheart, and no one can replace him :)

I absolutely love the amount of detail that you've put into this one shot, the descriptions are

outstanding :D

I love this. ^.^
It makes me smile. :)
~Chelsea~

Great story! I really really like how you ended it. I'll definitely have to read more of them. :)

^.^ at the comment above :D
I love it, still after reading it for the 50th time XD!

The layout is really amazing as well!
It goes extraordinarily well!

Great job Dibs!

I promised you I’d make time to read some of your stuff so, I’m doing so now .

Okay, so, reading the small summary’s really drawn me into the story but, he’s a few pointers:
You don’t need a disclaimer (no one on Mibba could possibly own a band…
Word count should be at the bottom of the summary as should be the dedication to your friend (it looks neater that way)
And you should think about making his a layout (it would attract more readers if you did so).

-

I really like the introduction but maybe you should italicize in the first line, “All Time Low” give a deeper effect to the reader.
I love how Jack refers to his guitar tech by his first name; there are some arsehole bands out there that wouldn’t even know their tech people’s names so, this makes it seem more friendly/real to me :)

“I’m always ready Matt. I was born ready.”
So cheesy but so adorable! Makes me think of him being like a little kid waiting to open presents on Christmas morning.

That’s all I want to quote from this piece.
It’s fast paced yet really easy to follow; I think that’s one of the best qualities you can get when writing a one shot.
It’s light, it’s kind of really fluffy and yet, the outcome of it really wasn’t what I expected; I thought this was going to be a little love story and I’m really kind of glad it isn’t – it’s perfect the way it is.

The lass you wrote it for is very lucky because I really did enjoy it as did everyone who’s read it, I’d expect.

Forgot to say in the first comment, that I think that you summed Jack up amazingly, you definitely pinned his personality right :)
Great job, I love it, gonna read it again!!

:O!
Oh my!
Wow!
That was amazing!
For that being typed up fast and just coming to your head, it's so amazing!
I love it, I love it, I love it!
Thank you, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!!
*hugs*
You're the best!!
More Jackness please :)
<3 xx