Private Pornstar - Comments

This is really good! Could you please write more????? PLEASE!!

(By the way, I'm stalking your stories.)

Awww, how could Frankie just let Bob leave Gee there?? :(

Again, another good story. I don't think I've ever seen a plot like this before. I mean, I've seen Gerard as a murderer and Frank the victim, Frank the pimp and Gerard the whore, Gerard part of mafia and Frank part of the opposing side (like Romeo and Juliet) but I don't think I've ever seen something like this.

Kudos to you. :) You have quite the imagination my friend. ;)

i really like this update please

i really like this story so far, i cant wait to see what happens next :D

Loveeee it. <3

I love your story!!!
I hope you can give mine a try!!

This is deffinately something different and I like that it is completely void of all things cliche and the whole "Fall in love within the first chapter" deal. I see myself really getting in to this! =] Update, please.

Please update!!!

I like where this is going. I can't wait till you write more. *subscribes*

Frank is a cocky little asshole ain't he? (haha see what I did there?) anyway this is a great story :) can't wait for the next update :)

The last chapter really broke my heart. But I couldn't stop reading it XD

None of your chapters suck. What sucks is that I didn't get an e-mail notification for this! U_U What also sucks is that Frank and Gerard are currently separated and you know us readers don't like when those two aren't in the same room. Hehe.
I love this story! ;D

that didnt suck it rocked and i feel rly bad for gerard. it's so sad! =,(

The last chapter did not suck. :P I love the originality of the story and, of course, the sex! XD

I've missed this:[

Whoa.
Bob is such a stick in the mud today.
Jealous? Weird.
Poor Gerard, left in the dust.

That didn't suck at all actually.
I'm just sad Gerard got left):
Update soon(:

it did not suck!!!!

Bob's an asshole. ;~; Poor Gee!
Awesome chapter! :) Update soon.

Aw, poor gerard!