Okay, I love this story. It seems to be well thought out and your grammar is better than most people on this site. But take this from an Irish person; No one speaks like that. No one. Yes we have a tendencies to drop letters, but it's always the letter 'T'. Yes we have different dialects but no one speaks like that. Also, 'mama' and 'papa'? I only know one person that calls their parents that. And she's English. Calling your parents 'mama' and 'papa' is more of an old-school English thing, and by old-school, I mean around the 1800's
Holy shit. That was freaking long and awesome. Awwww they got to hear the lil baby and Sasha is almost gone now! I've been waiting for this for a while and am super excited! So keep the updates coming and can't wait for the next.