Sorry I've been away so long loves! I got very busy very quickly with some crazy stuff I will be sure to include in this story :P In the meantime, keep reading, and tell me what you think! I also would not be opposed to hearing what exactly you think is going on in this story (it's definitely open for debate) and where you think/would like to see it go.
This story is a world away from what you'd normally expect. I really enjoy it. Although it is a bit confusing at times, it's still excellent to read. I'm anxious to see what happens. :D <3 ~Allykins
I like your style of short stories. It's almost like a poem: leaving room for the reader to think about it instead of creating a perfect image in their head. If that makes since and if you know what I mean. Keep it up. =D
I have read so many stories on here. This is the first story that holds this much passion. I'm not talking about the characters. Although they have it. I'm talking about you. This story really is one of the best I've read.
I find this interesting. It is short with a lot of emotion and imagery flowing about. Excellent work!! ~~ My favorite chapters are 14-17 because they are very true. All together they deliever a theme to your story. And I can relate to it as well. Keep up with the updates and warn me because even if I subscribe, I don't always check my e-mail. xoXO zilly
This is absolutely wonderful. A big change from the long, drawn out stories I've been reading as of late. I can really relate to the third chapter. I have a history with using drugs, alcohol, and sex to forget my ex.