Re: Are you alone? - Comments

  • maedrinksblood

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    I quite like this [:
    June 29th, 2011 at 11:27am
  • Heartbreakwarefare

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    Great , just great .
    June 15th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • FlyMeToTheMoon

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    Hangy Hair..You're brilliant and I wuv you :D This story IS super short but its good..especially because you wrote it ;)
    November 15th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • TheRibbonOnMyWrist

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    Sorry I've been away so long loves! I got very busy very quickly with some crazy stuff I will be sure to include in this story :P In the meantime, keep reading, and tell me what you think! I also would not be opposed to hearing what exactly you think is going on in this story (it's definitely open for debate) and where you think/would like to see it go.

    Thanks!
    Jaideabel
    July 29th, 2010 at 10:29am
  • BriasCyanide

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    This story is a world away from what you'd normally expect.
    I really enjoy it.
    Although it is a bit confusing at times, it's still excellent to read. I'm anxious to see what happens. :D
    <3
    ~Allykins
    May 4th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • Ayana Sioux

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    I like your style of short stories. It's almost like a poem: leaving room for the reader to think about it instead of creating a perfect image in their head. If that makes since and if you know what I mean.
    Keep it up. =D
    May 3rd, 2010 at 11:04pm
  • VampAngel77

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    I just started reading this and it's amazing!!! The chapters went by so quickly though and now I need more! Please update
    April 18th, 2010 at 11:21pm
  • Habanaka123

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    I have read so many stories on here. This is the first story that holds this much passion. I'm not talking about the characters. Although they have it. I'm talking about you. This story really is one of the best I've read.
    April 18th, 2010 at 06:15am
  • FlyMeToTheMoon

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    Lovee, you have got some mad writing skills! You're so good :)
    April 2nd, 2010 at 07:45am
  • zillaidma

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    I find this interesting. It is short with a lot of emotion and imagery flowing about. Excellent work!! ~~
    My favorite chapters are 14-17 because they are very true. All together they deliever a theme to your story. And I can relate to it as well. Keep up with the updates and warn me because even if I subscribe, I don't always check my e-mail.
    xoXO
    zilly
    March 24th, 2010 at 10:11am
  • Christelline

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    <33
    So strange how the chapters mirror memories of mine.
    March 22nd, 2010 at 05:02am
  • oheyimkelly

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    Hey one question how do you slant your words?
    March 22nd, 2010 at 02:25am
  • blastxthemusicxfob

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    ahh that was sooo good! these chapters are all very intense. i like them!! no scratch that, i love them. i want more. keep em coming.
    March 22nd, 2010 at 01:49am
  • kusterbeck-

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    JAIDEAAAAAA!
    ASDFHJKL;
    That was ABSOLUTELY amaaaazing!
    I love how the chaptesr are short and understandable
    <3
    March 16th, 2010 at 06:02pm
  • blastxthemusicxfob

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    wow this is great! i'm very impressed. keep it up! *is proud* you finally posted something!! story-wise. like... with lots of chapters. yay!!
    March 14th, 2010 at 11:15pm
  • Christelline

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    So sweet. A lovestruck couple, indeed.
    March 12th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • Be_Not_Seen

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    I absolutely love this. Very powerful.
    Keep it up!!
    March 10th, 2010 at 01:06am
  • Christelline

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    So cute <33
    March 9th, 2010 at 05:03am
  • Christelline

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    This is absolutely wonderful. A big change from the long, drawn out stories I've been reading as of late. I can really relate to the third chapter. I have a history with using drugs, alcohol, and sex to forget my ex.

    I hope you post more soon :)
    March 8th, 2010 at 12:35am
  • mamihlapinatapai

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    I love this!!!
    Very unexplainable of how I like it but I just like it.
    Understand?
    Probably not.
    Thanks for entering :]
    February 26th, 2010 at 01:33am