I just read all of this today! Wow, this is an amazing story dahl and i dont understand how you didnt get alot of readers, subscribers, etc. I hope that you have a sequel to this, but if she died than just an epilogue :D But this was nothing short of amazing...if i was you, i would post this on another site as well so it gets the readers and subscribers you deserve.
oh my freaking gosh!! why is there only like two comments?!??! yall should be ashamed of yourselves. this story is amazing and if you are to lazy to comment but not to lazy to read, you should just stop reading it all together. sorry, i just read this story today so i wanted to get caught up. THATS why i havent commented. but im pretty sure, the people that havent commented, have no good reason not to. okay, im done ranting.