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  • roux.

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    Another body? :O
    March 3rd, 2010 at 09:28am
  • slashXdash

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    I really hope its not her friend that was murdered, but hopefully another body of a past death, but I'm having a feeling it will be. You've also made me extremely curious to that male helping the other woman pass on. :D
    March 2nd, 2010 at 09:16am
  • roux.

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    What?What? She wasn't alone? So he killed again? Dude - this is making me wriggle around in my seat!

    LMFAO.

    I stalk the stories that I read, and flood them with comments. So sorry if you find this annoying but bleh... I can't help it.
    February 28th, 2010 at 03:25am
  • roux.

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    She would be his?

    Crap... that dude is effing crazy!! Oh, and too late - I've already pimped you out. X )
    February 28th, 2010 at 01:10am
  • solovely;

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    Wow. I love these kinds of stories. Another one; that if it were a book I would recommend someone.
    February 28th, 2010 at 12:10am
  • kennaaaa

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    Omg I love this!
    It actually gave me chills
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    Can't wait for the update!
    February 26th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • kennaaaa

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    Omg I love this!
    It actually gave me chills
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    Can't wait for the update!
    February 26th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • Luvbytes

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    Hmm I don't know if I'm pimp worthy painfully.obvious, truth be told- Im once again making things up as I go along. Fingers crossed that it works out, but who knows it could come tumbling down like a house of cards. I do have a general idea but I just need to fill in the gaps as I write it and see where the story goes.. I know not exactly the confidence you want to hear from the writer right? lol.

    And welcome slashxdash! Lovely bones you say? honestly I dont know what you're talking about because :blushes: I dont do horror films. Not books, not films, not even Halloween stuff. Im the biggest chicken in the world! I get freaked so easily, so why in the world did I decide to try to write about not only ghosts but a serial killer? lol I really dont know. I guess for the challenge of it. To try to capture the emotion behind it. Fear, anxiety, aprehension, paranoia- those are all things I know all too well, so hopefully it will come through in the story.
    February 26th, 2010 at 06:01pm
  • slashXdash

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    Okay, wow. This sounds so amazing.
    For some reason, from the very first chapter I just got the impression of lovely bones. Not that it's anything like lovely bones, because its not, but because its feels like this is going to be ones of those stories that blows you over and makes you think in so many ways. Already I feel like I love this story and I can't wait to get engrossed in more!
    You've written this very well so far and you've given enough information in only the first two chapters to get me excited! I hope you update soon. :]
    February 26th, 2010 at 11:14am
  • roux.

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    You've got to be joking me. The first time I read that revised summary - I knew I was going to love this story even more and more. Don't worry - I'll pimp you out a bit. With your permission of course.

    And ohh... A murder. I like this!
    February 26th, 2010 at 10:26am
  • Luvbytes

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    lol, well I made a few revisions. So far you're my only reader so thank you so much for your lovely comment!!
    February 26th, 2010 at 03:13am
  • roux.

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    OMFG!!! How can there be no comments yet for this story?!!!! I love it!!! You are a great writer... and apart from a few typos, the story was brilliant. Screw it, I'm subscribing!

    <3 Ghost stories!! :D
    February 25th, 2010 at 09:48am