Defying Gravity - Comments

i like it, please update again soon!!!

Minor grammatical errors on the last one, but nothing big- Paul's cute but he's shrugging too much. I like the anti-Bella sentiment you've got going but it would be nice if she weren't so passive. Who's the model that's portraying her?

Ohai Aprilz ;L it's vicky I've finished my story if ya want to read it i will tey to upload it.

I'll be your editor, but what happened to your mom?

Okay, so in that one chapter that you edited, you spelled phase wrong. Sorry, had to comment on that. And in one of the other chapters (it's already been mentioned) you were saying Jake's name as Jack. Other than that, I'm subscribed!!! Gotta finish the story first though.... updates soon please!

i cant wait for more :)

loved it

Aww Paul is being nice =) update soon please

the only thing i can see that needs changing is that 'alfa' is spelt alpha :)
and maybe just keep an eye out on how you construct your sentences. say them out loud first if you aren't sure because i've found while writing essays that words seem fine on paper, but can sound retarded when you say them out loud :)

I love this chapter and I cannot wait for the next chapter!!
Please update!! <333

great update

can't wait for the next chapter!

awesome new chapter!!!!

loved it

Yess!!!! Jared phased!!!
Ohhh Update!!! <3333

really good story so far!! my heart broke a little reading her with Jared and her telling him to stay away. That was sad but i figure they will be friends again...or thats at least what i hope!

i really like it..please update

great update

Love It!, Update Soon?! XD

loved it