Defying Gravity - Comments

  • WhisperTragedy

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    I love how your mother edits your story!
    Soooo cutee!
    I don't even tell my mom what my stories are about!

    Wish we had a stronger relationship...

    Anyways, update soon, please?
    May 14th, 2010 at 01:59am
  • richfan19

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    great update. can't wait for you to update again =)
    May 14th, 2010 at 01:58am
  • BittersweetVenom.

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    Love the story :D
    Update soon please!
    *subscribes*
    <3
    May 13th, 2010 at 10:09pm
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I like this. :DD
    Update soonn! <33
    April 26th, 2010 at 11:43pm
  • richfan19

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    yay! you updated. i really liked this chapter. =) update soon please
    April 26th, 2010 at 09:27pm
  • a venom

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    more soon?
    April 26th, 2010 at 09:01pm
  • Mimi's buttercup.

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    Okay here we go, first comment for ya from me...

    Well the intro seems pretty interesting, but it kinda reminds me of that movie Raise Your Voice. Girl aspires to be a famous person one day, so she tries to get into all these schools. Then things changes and obstacles get in the way. It's not the same in everything, but the base of it is. Over all its pretty good.

    The first chapter had some words mess ups in it, like some words that didn't need to be there and words that didn't make sense where they were. The chapter as a whole though was kinda boring and blah, but it's the first chapter so won't hold it against you. Either way it was just an okay chapter, nothing signifigant happened in it.

    Well I'll read more later.

    -Mimi
    April 7th, 2010 at 02:37pm
  • Liar Liar

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    this is good. update soon please. and just curious who plays gisele in the story she looks familiar but i cant place her?
    April 2nd, 2010 at 07:39pm
  • bayley

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    You spell Charlie wrong.
    April 2nd, 2010 at 07:18am
  • a venom

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    loved it
    April 1st, 2010 at 02:11am
  • restlessheart

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    Yeah I think she is gonna become a wolf too.
    Anyway...I really like it!

    Sara_Gates
    March 30th, 2010 at 05:04am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    I have a feeling
    she's gonna become
    a wolf..lol
    :))
    I love your story
    :)))))!
    March 29th, 2010 at 02:01am
  • oh how lovely.

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    I really like the story.
    I'm in love with the banner.
    Please update.
    March 29th, 2010 at 12:57am
  • richfan19

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    yay! another chapter =) update as soon as you can
    March 28th, 2010 at 07:32pm
  • XoXHaysXoX

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    Great story but I have one small intell. Well I noticed that you had Jacob/Jake Black's name as Jack in the last chapter. I was wondering if that was intentional or a mistake.
    March 27th, 2010 at 03:05am
  • a venom

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    loved the update
    more soon?
    March 26th, 2010 at 06:58pm
  • richfan19

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    update soon =)
    March 26th, 2010 at 06:56pm
  • richfan19

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    liking it so far. update soon =)
    March 21st, 2010 at 03:24am
  • a venom

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    more soon?
    March 21st, 2010 at 01:43am
  • richfan19

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    like it so far. hopefully you writer sooner next chapter =)
    March 9th, 2010 at 07:35am