The Run of Your Black Eyeliner - Comments, page 12

Julie Von Seaton (100)

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haha, definitely love the story line so far.
i suscribed. :D:D

November 4th, 2007 at 04:12am

DontEatMyCherries (100)

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I like it!
update?

November 4th, 2007 at 04:07am

Rainbowing (100)

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ohh i love where this story is going update soon plz

November 3rd, 2007 at 05:31pm

whiskeydrownedballad (100)

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OMFG i love it already *subscribes*
good boysex ... next chapter?
more when u can plz

November 3rd, 2007 at 04:00pm

Fueled by Sugar Spaz (100)

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HEY you! Please write more soon! Pweease?

November 3rd, 2007 at 12:32pm

VaNyA (100)

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hAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! gee seems to be a tad straightforward

hahahahaa i loves it *subcribes* more when you can!

November 3rd, 2007 at 04:36am

Mrs.NickTilton (100)

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i liked it..... more soon?

November 3rd, 2007 at 02:06am

my_madden_romance27 (100)

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I think, you're rushing too much. Let the story flow. Isn't it a bit cliche' that Frank started to 'feel something' on Gerard in their first meeting? Make it more original. I didn't mean to be offended. I tell you this because I like the story and I wouldn't bother to read it if I didn't like it. I'm subscribing anyway, so yeah. I'll wait for the next update and be slower a bit. Let the plot unfold neatly.

November 2nd, 2007 at 10:06pm

XoAwWwSuGaRoX (100)

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Oooh I likey so far!
Yes they shall have a little fun!
More soon?
♥

November 2nd, 2007 at 01:25pm

heart_shaped_kisses (100)

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wowness that is awesome!
ha ha so funny at the end
i did not expevt that
lovin it
x

November 2nd, 2007 at 01:00pm

baysway (100)

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Wow. You get right to the point and don't play around. I like it! No. I love it! Can't wait for more.

November 2nd, 2007 at 12:07pm

Please Die ! (100)

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ooooo yes that Does sound gooood =]
more soon .. please ??!

November 2nd, 2007 at 09:51am

Alice Verney (150)

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i think its awesome more soon?

November 2nd, 2007 at 09:25am

Mindfreak. (400)

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Hm.
Seems good.

Story line is a little rushed.
Like, what you fit in one chapter should have been in like, 6 or 7 chapters.
And some proof reading would be good, too.

But still, good job.

:mrgreen:

November 2nd, 2007 at 09:02am