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  • Galaxia;

    Galaxia; (100)

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    I read the prequel i thought it was preetyy amazing ^^'
    but constructive criticism could you check your grammar? I get a little confused on what your trying to say due to wrong words put into the story(:
    can't wait for this one! Update soon!
    I'll subscribe ;)
    March 9th, 2010 at 07:08pm
  • I'm.Not.Insane.

    I'm.Not.Insane. (100)

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    *subscribes*
    Yay a sequel.
    Can't wait.
    =]
    March 4th, 2010 at 03:45am
  • ShylyHyper

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    oh my gosh i loved kidnapped by someone close its amazing please update on the sequel
    March 1st, 2010 at 08:35am
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