Cinderella Man - Comments

:DDDDDDD i thought this was over. yaaaaay, it's not!! :) i'm in love with Slim in this one. <3 more soon?? yes.

lol, love the Kim joke... Marshall is such a sex freak! more soon?? <3

amazing update!
Marshal, in love ;)
and the Kim joke was amusing

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Awwww.... that was so sweet!!!! I loved it!!! Update more please!!!! =) <3 <3 <3

wooooooo !
Update = )

I fuckin love this story and I don't tend to read a lot about slim anyways, I cant wait for more update soon.

A new update already??! :D I forgive you for the last cliffhanger now! This was hilarious hahahah when he said he wasn't about to get no blue balls I fell off my chair! Loved the update!

Pure Perfection! My favorite part;

“We can cut the act, Marshall.”

He shook his head, “It ain’t no act.”

“Slim Shady…in love?” She chuckled, amusing herself.

“I ain’t heartless, you know.”

“Could’ve fooled me.”

I have no clue why, but I just love that part. I'm glad that they admitted their feelings for each other!

Chapter 22: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA XD I love the part about Kim K's ass ;P that was hilarious!
Update soon<33333333333333333333333333333333333333

Hmmm yeah, this update made me really happy on my first day of senior year. Even though the cliffhanger is killing me, I appreciate it. Please update as soon as possible- you may not see how good it is, but trust me, this is good.

OH NO! Whats going to happen?!?!?!?
When will the happiness come???? Well, then the story wouldn't be so climatic sooooo.... You just do your thing :D

Update soon! <3<3<3<3

Aw, the girls are gorgeous!! Loved the update but I wanna know what she does now that Marshall is being a dick again. More soon??? <3<3<3
And yeah, I'd trade people for Eminem too lol <3

Whitney sounds adorable. :)
i liked the update, honestly.

oh no he didn't.

noooooo! no no no! this is all terribly wrong!

But I do agree with MunchkinLuvsYou. The only way you can be forgiven is if you update in a very timely manner. :D

Whaaaaaaaaaaat!! How could you do this to me. I'm such a loyal reader and THIS is how you repay me! With the cliffiest cliffhanger EVER?!
D:

I can only forgive you when another update comes along. Hahahah I loved it as always<33

yay!! goood goood goood lol:D

I found this last night around 11, and I thought I'd just sample a few chapters to see how well the flow of this story compares to the others on the search list of stories with tags of Eminem. I was gonna go to bed soon after, but then I discovered how not only grammatically correct this is, but how wonderfully developed the characters are and how smoothly the plot flows.

The only other Eminem story I managed to check out last night kept changing verb tenses from past to present, and the plot was... very cliched. It was a nice fantasy, but a realistic touch is what really makes certain stories stand out, and yours is one of those stories.

So, now to what I came on here to say. Please update soon if you can. I adore this story. :) I love how you portray Eminem and the girl (forgive me, I just can't remember her name after 24 hours away from it. D: See? You need to update so I can remember and enjoy more!). Also, those sexy scenes are... HOT. Don't worry about them being awkward. Red cheeks when you're writing it means it must be good stuff. :P

I pretty much looove this story. (: