Wow, two chapters in one day. lol.Aww, that was sad. But I'm glad she will be with Tyler and the baby for ever now. It was hard to read and it was really emotional. Great job on this story wife! I loved it! It was a beautiful chapter! Love you!
Oh cry! I loved the ending, it was very bittersweet. I think it ended perfectly though :) And Madison still hasnt read it, and she still doesnt know anything! hahahaha!
so sad, the worst part for me was reading about the baby dying. I knew it was gonna happen, but babies dying is really bad for me. I had a hard enough time with a miscarraige, ya know? I loved it. Very good ending.
WHOA!!! Dude, don't kill Trinity! I hope they're all right, but when you slip into the world of the unconscious, you do panic!!!! More soon? you better post the final chapter soon! Or you'll have hell to pay... (just kidding!!!)
Omg, no no no!! I can't believe it..actually I kind of can, but omg. How sad. I don't know what's going on! I can't believe this is almost over. It seems like you just started it! More soon! I can't believe you told in law this was going to happen and not me! grr. I forgive you...maybe. lol. j/k. I loved it. More soon!!!
OMG that was sad at the end! I am kind of glad you let me in on this so I could prepare myself a little. That's what inlaw's are for, don't u know? lol I loved it, though. I love babies... Trinity is a sweetheart. I still miss Tyler. More soon?
I know whats happening and no one else does! hahaha! I loved the first part. that was really cute. I'm sad that he died. I miss Tyler. I'm with DP though, Chelsea was pretty out of line to write a letter like that. It def added drama, that's for sure. lol
More soon? I can't believe this one is almost over!
Aww, i loved the part where they met. That was great. I have no idea what you're going to be doing now. I thought I knew, but now I don't know. Grr. Don't tell me though! I want to be surprised. I'm pretty sure that I won't hate you. The chapter was amazing! More soon!
It's really cute how they met! I just wish that he didn't die and I think what's going to happen doesn't happen... but i can't be sure... I think Chelsea was out of line though... she shouldn't have written a letter like that..
Aww, that was sad and sweet. I'm so glad the baby is here! I love the name, it's so pretty. I have a feeling I know what's going to happen, but i'm not going to say anything or you will be mad at me. lol More soon!!
I was sad and sweet...all at the same time! i loveed it a lot!! I love how his bandmates were there with her. More soon. i know my comment sucks bananas, but oh well, you know i love you inlaw!!
Aww.. so sad, but a beautiful chapter.. I would have frozen up like that in labor too! Ouchies! Trinity is wonderful name! Yay! :D I loved Karma's explanation! More soon?
OK, I read it at the same time the wife did, but she's been hogging the comp, so I couldn't comment! ha!
I loved it, as always. It;s so sad. I can't believe you don't have a name for Karma's baby yet. You're slacking, girlie! lol j/k j/k. I'm glad Karma finally gave it to that monster bitch of a mother. lol. More soon?
Wow, that was awesome how she yelled at her mom. Go Karma!! lol
It was so sad though :( I was sad like, the whole time. I hate that Tyler's gone, it's so upsetting to me. I'm glad Chelsea is gone. She's still crazy, but gone...right? lol. Great chapter! More soon! Love you wife, kisses!
That was awesome! Even though she went into premature labor because of it, she told her mother off! YES!!! All of the labor pains now will be worth it! Yay for Thomas too.. He's such a protective grandfather (and great grandfather now...) More soon?!?!
It was a sad and depressing chapter, very well written though. I had to skim it because once I started reading the part about the beginning of the wake, I remembered going to my uncle's wake and hiding out in the bathroom with my sister and my godmother for hours until it ended... So, I can't give much of a comment.. besides well written and depressing... sorry. :(
aww, it was such a sad and beautiful chapter. I loved it. I was surprised Tyler's father acted that way. That was horrible to treat Karma that way. OMG, I just read Morgan's comment. She's a freak, don't listen to her. Great chapter! More soon! Love you wife!
This is so sad. I can't even imagine something like this. I could never kill one of my characters off. That would be too hard. I loved it. I can't believe that father of his...I'm kind of surprised her mother didn't make some kind of an appearance to cause chaos. Maybe those two should hook up...His dad and her mom, not.....oh whatever. You know what I'm trying to say. lol
Aww, it was so sad. I feel so bad for Karma and the baby. Chelsea is sick. I dont' even know if she needs to go to jail as much as she needs help, you know? It was a great chapter. Can't wait to see what you do next! I love this story, as sad as it is. More soon! Love you. Sorry it took me so long to read it!