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  • pat semetary;

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    OH MY GOD I REMEMBER THIS STORY FROM QUIZILLA. It was like the best thing ever back then, and it still is now Clap
    July 7th, 2014 at 03:46am
  • TrustTheFate

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    looking back at this, I remember how I loved this story. I used to wait impatiently for the next episode, it was absolutely amazing!
    June 5th, 2013 at 11:26am
  • MayaAngelou0524

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    This was amazing! Oh my gosh, this is amazing! I was so creeped out because just as I was finishing Chapter 25 my computer made a weird beeping noise out of the blue and I was like Shifty! lmfao SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!! Smile
    September 2nd, 2012 at 06:48pm
  • julialynn!

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    Wow, just finished reading. I did not expect that at all. Like I'm blown away. I really wish they all didn't die but oh well.. shit happens. I feel slightly awkward, I was so caught up on who did it, that I never would have guessed any of that. Great job for keeping it a legit mystery the entire time for me, Bravo.
    July 24th, 2012 at 11:56pm
  • ryan.berch

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    What is the sequel?
    July 24th, 2012 at 05:18pm
  • Valiente

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    Holy crap. I'm fifteen now O.O

    I love this story, and I love the sequel. Thank you so much for delivering this beautiful, chilling masterpiece to us. -A
    July 22nd, 2012 at 02:15am
  • Fee-hee-hee-heeny!

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    This story FREAKED ME OUT. In a good way, though! I never would have suspected ~WINTER~. Obviously. I knew it wouldn't be the parents because after all the speculation, it'd have been too obvious. Very, very well done!
    July 20th, 2012 at 11:25pm
  • emochick69

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    I loved the story ... Very creepy (in an awesome way :-) )I was wondering if they was a sequel . I'd love to read it
    July 19th, 2012 at 10:01pm
  • Dom.

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    oh I forgot to mention! I'll be 15 this August so I was a little creeped out by this. In a good way though xD
    July 19th, 2012 at 10:09am
  • Dom.

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    Holy crap O_O I was expecting a cliche ending but boy was I wrong!!! Great job on this! My birthday is in August along with my grandpa's so I was like, "She'll either die on my birthday or my grandpa's..." My grandpa's won xD But great job on this, seriously. I'M ON MY WAY TO THE SEQUEL! :D
    July 19th, 2012 at 09:51am
  • Somnolent.

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    Love it!
    July 17th, 2012 at 08:38pm
  • Haylie Jaed

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    Like the other new comments, I came here because of the article. I started the story thinking it was a little cliché (especially in the naming of the characters, as being weird with naming has become a cliché in itself) but you definitely proved me wrong!

    I really enjoyed this. It was gripping and the ending completely stunned me. I never saw it coming! I felt so bad for Tommy in the end, though. =(
    July 17th, 2012 at 12:05pm
  • Artemis Love

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    I started reading this, because of an article that was posted, regarding your story. I'm at June's chapter at the moment, but I have to say, this is quite interesting. I enjoy reading it very much.
    July 17th, 2012 at 01:10am
  • Painted Smiles

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    Wow, I'm not sure how surprised you'll be when you see my comment since you finished this story a year ago... Did you? Never mind, I'm still reading and I'm hooked on it. Seriously, I love it.

    One thing though...you might not care to change it or whatever but in July's chapter it's her birthday..in July...and she's going to school. That seemed a bit odd to me, but whatever I guess. Okay, I'll continue reading now...
    July 16th, 2012 at 10:41pm
  • JanL

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    Lovin' the story right now, it's an awesome storyline. :) Have you read "And then there were none" by Agatha Cristi? It's sorta like this but different..
    March 7th, 2011 at 09:52am
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    only read the first two chapters and instantly want it to be made into a movie xD i would definately see it i imagine it on lifetime haha (:
    December 13th, 2010 at 09:03pm
  • Kookiezz

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    Really gives you that mystery feeling in a story. :)
    November 21st, 2010 at 11:58pm
  • xxskittlesxx123

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    shit that was a scary storie >-< but wow... UR GOOD AT WRITING ! omg u should so make a horror movie out of it !
    October 18th, 2010 at 08:46am
  • tourmaline

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    This story freakin consumed me, kept me on edge, made me smile, made me CRINGE. It was better than any story i've read so far on mibba, and i'm not just saying that to kiss some ass so you read the story i'll post, whenever i get around to it... Ever since starting 9th grade, something morbid and even macabre has sprung about me so i decided to search 'dead' in the search box, looking for a story to keep me busy for an hour or so. I'll never forget this story, you're a pure genius; i wish i had your talent! :D Like i said, i'll *never* forget this!!!!!
    September 25th, 2010 at 01:41am
  • The Colour of Music

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    Wow!
    I loved that whole thing, from start to end!
    Kept me on my toes! ;)
    I can't wait for the sequel!
    I am soooo looking forward to it!
    ♥♥♥♥♥
    :D
    September 21st, 2010 at 01:06pm