This was amazing! Oh my gosh, this is amazing! I was so creeped out because just as I was finishing Chapter 25 my computer made a weird beeping noise out of the blue and I was like ! SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!!
Wow, just finished reading. I did not expect that at all. Like I'm blown away. I really wish they all didn't die but oh well.. shit happens. I feel slightly awkward, I was so caught up on who did it, that I never would have guessed any of that. Great job for keeping it a legit mystery the entire time for me, Bravo.
This story FREAKED ME OUT. In a good way, though! I never would have suspected ~WINTER~. Obviously. I knew it wouldn't be the parents because after all the speculation, it'd have been too obvious. Very, very well done!
Holy crap O_O I was expecting a cliche ending but boy was I wrong!!! Great job on this! My birthday is in August along with my grandpa's so I was like, "She'll either die on my birthday or my grandpa's..." My grandpa's won xD But great job on this, seriously. I'M ON MY WAY TO THE SEQUEL! :D
Like the other new comments, I came here because of the article. I started the story thinking it was a little cliché (especially in the naming of the characters, as being weird with naming has become a cliché in itself) but you definitely proved me wrong!
I really enjoyed this. It was gripping and the ending completely stunned me. I never saw it coming! I felt so bad for Tommy in the end, though. =(
I started reading this, because of an article that was posted, regarding your story. I'm at June's chapter at the moment, but I have to say, this is quite interesting. I enjoy reading it very much.
Wow, I'm not sure how surprised you'll be when you see my comment since you finished this story a year ago... Did you? Never mind, I'm still reading and I'm hooked on it. Seriously, I love it.
One thing though...you might not care to change it or whatever but in July's chapter it's her birthday..in July...and she's going to school. That seemed a bit odd to me, but whatever I guess. Okay, I'll continue reading now...
Lovin' the story right now, it's an awesome storyline. :) Have you read "And then there were none" by Agatha Cristi? It's sorta like this but different..
This story freakin consumed me, kept me on edge, made me smile, made me CRINGE. It was better than any story i've read so far on mibba, and i'm not just saying that to kiss some ass so you read the story i'll post, whenever i get around to it... Ever since starting 9th grade, something morbid and even macabre has sprung about me so i decided to search 'dead' in the search box, looking for a story to keep me busy for an hour or so. I'll never forget this story, you're a pure genius; i wish i had your talent! :D Like i said, i'll *never* forget this!!!!!