Last Shot at Redemption - Comments

This is freaking AWESOME!!!!!!! But I see you havent updated recently. Whats up with that? So many people love this story. So can we pretty please have an update? pleeeeeease? Do ot for the children! Lol

Ahhh what's next? I wanna know!
Update soon! :)

I just started reading, and I've gotta say I'm disappointed that you haven't updated in a while :\
Hopefully you'll pick this back up soon!

Love the story so far, really incredible
update soon please XD

it's been so long since you've updated! soon.

Chin up honey. Enjoy the warm Florida rays 8D

Awesome job! I loved the update, almost made me cry.

friggin looooooooooooove it! :D

Woo Orlando!
Bring shorts! It's gotten really hot lately.

wow, the dynamics you create between your characters are pretty intense. I really like this story, and i can't wait for more.

I can not wait for the next one to come out. I really like how your writing this, Great job!!!

This is amazingg. More (:<3

I am pleasently surprised. You took me on an emotional rollercoaster. this story is almost destined to be awesome! cant wait for more! I like how Shoun isn't in yet, gives us reader time to learn the character, and it sets a good pace for the story!

love it! updatee! and i agree that shaun shouldnt come in like right away!

yay!!!!!! You updated. :)) Cant wait for more

I LOVE IT! keep em' coming!

Loved it! :]
Update soon :D

i like it! more

This is a really good story so far. Update soon!

i love it!!!