Spiritual Place - Comments

wow I haven't read all of this story, but what I have read is Awesome

Am I still your friend even tho your dad wont let us?

Saya, how long are you planning on this?

Hiya. I love the idea of the story. But honestly, try to be bit more descriptive. I'm still a bit in the dark as to what the characters look like, and what Spiritual Place is like. Is it invisible to humans? How do they get there? What happens there? I'm not bashing your work, because it's really good. But even an author who has published over a hundred books still has room for improvment. It's definatly original and unique, and that in itself is a wonderful accomplishment. Keep up the great work!

Hey, why do you now come & go on the computer? Love the back round. You gotta show me how to do that.

Nice job! want me to write chapter 5? E-MAIL ME!!!

Hey Savannah, not much. I know who you are lol! Thanks. And you're welcome, haha. Btw, I have it set so that you can edit the story and write chapters for it too!

Hey Saya, what's up? This is your sister. Awesome story btw. & thank you Saya, you're the best.