The Softer Side of Unbearable - Comments

Wonderful epilogue.

Awww...I'm sad that it's over. :(
But the epilogue was great! :)

I loved Bailey's monologue, that is what makes people feel like they're connected to something real, something they know when they read a fanfiction. It was a sweet chapter, but that part was the best.

I don't know why but I don't think I ever commented on this story... Either way it's great, il be sad yo see it go :(

Bailey's little monologue made me feel really sad. I have a friend who's death I haven't had closure with, so I really connected with it.
When I started reading "Two years later..." I actually said, "What? No, no! You can't be finished yet! I'M NOT READY FOR THIS!"

This chapter was really tragic, but sweet at the same time. When Matt found her, it was so frightening. I was replaying all of the possible situations in my head, and was relieved to know that she was alright.

You don't know how excited I was when I saw that there was an e-mail for this in my inbox!
I was actually starting to panic with Matt when he found that Bailey. I was internally screaming, "OHGODOHGODOHGOD!" I was so glad she was alright! Way to cause panic! Loved the long awaited update! :)

This drama with Jeff and Angel is just insane, real friends don't pull stunts like that and lie about it. Not impressed, but who am I to say? I like how you paced their relationship (Matt and Bailey) and didn't rush it. Your writing style is developing a little more by every chapter, but the pacing with their relationship was pretty good. Great chapter.

I don't know if I should be pissed or pleased with Jeff and Angel right now. It's just so...LHALKGHSAD;LFHV!

Wow, I didn't see that coming. It probably felt like Bailey had a knife stuck in her back hearing that. I really liked the flashbacks to the videotaping. That was just so sweet.

GWASHJHAGLODI? At JEFF'S?!?! Well...at least she's safe.

Wow, and so true when it comes to people who have a friend with an addiction problem. They'll only get the help when they truly want it. I like how you're pacing your chapters slightly more than before.

You don't know how excited I got when I saw I had an update for this.
The very last line that Bailey said...gave me chills. I feel really sorry for her, and everything that she has been going through.

I liked the flow in this chapter. It was also cute to see the interaction between Matt and Gavin.

I don't really know how to feel about the update. Like, it was good, but you could feel the tension and it just kind of felt tense throughout the rest of the chapter.

Hmmm... intriguing. I wonder how the visit will go.

I just hope you all realize that Matt Webb is mine, and that I called him years ago before Marianas Trench became popular. So yeah. Live with it. :)

Awww, I love how Gavin is jealous of Matt. It's cute.

Ah, just what I needed to cheer me up. :)
I really admire Bailey and Matt's relationship, albeit made up. Matt is always so concerned and caring. I love it!

I really liked the song...yet again.
Good for Jeff knowing that Bailey needs her time. I like that man.