I already feel bad for Auden, she has such a sad past already! It's clear what she needs now... some Franceschi lovin' to help heal her broken heart :) Seriously, though, I really like this. I love the way you write, and this was a really interesting start!
It's clear what she needs now... some Franceschi lovin' to help heal her broken heart :)
Seriously, though, I really like this. I love the way you write, and this was a really interesting start!