Short Tellings of Tall Tales - Comments

^ What she said.
Also, fantasy font is not your friend, nor will to ever be your friend.
Seriously.

It’s was the best prank
It was
Annoy the girls, and make themselves legends
no comma
thinking they where paedos after all
paedos? What's a paedo? :/
the sports teachers’ son
sports teacher's

Wouldn't they be called change rooms?

the girls where sat talking
?
“Hustle girls!” She could be heard yelling
"Hustle girls!" she could be heard yelling.

You have three rumours?
sports bag waiting to find out the truth.
comma after bag.
Underneath her over sized jumped
jumpsuit?
“You’re late.” She told Eve
"You're late," she told Eve.
"I’ll tell Miss Ryan your just coming.”
you're.

I think you should go into more detail on what happened in the tape.
You don't really mention at all, and I guess it's mysterious but it sort of left me hanging.
Y'know?

Otherwise it was good, pretty original, haven't really seen anything like this before.
:)

Your story might be reported because collections of one shots that don't relate to a main theme are against the rules. Your entire paragraph structure is completely off and you need to fix it. If your story is reported and you need help fixing this, let me know, I'll be glad to help you out.

ooooo i just finished all of them.
ohmygosh, the one in the church, i actually had tears in my eyes and a lump on my throat! is that sad or are you just an amazingly touching writer? i'm so proud to have you as my best friend!
oh abbi u truly are amazing
xxx

ur genious at writing gurl, u have SUCH a mature style that it could fit into a thirty year olds shoes. mmm u'd have to crumple the paper up realll tight.
but u get what i mean
actually it would depend what size shoe it is, if it was two small the paper would stick out the top, if it was two big it would yet lost in the toes...
but ur waiiiii talented, I LOVE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Omgosh! I love it! its so good, happy and sad, just the right mix! Thank youu, made my day reading that <3

Omgg! Another amazing short story... I don't know which one I prefer but both are REALLY good :D

I think its amazing! Its so good and soo sad and just wow!
I love it! Are you going to be writing more for this collection??
<3