Liar - Comments

  • Rango

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    I actually have never paid Kisame any attention... but this one shot has left me craving more stories about him.

    >.>
    <.<

    I loved the way this was written, short stories usually leave me wanting something more, but this seemed to wrap things up nicely and leave it with that 'complete' feeling.
    September 5th, 2010 at 11:31pm
  • the fallen.

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    Aww, why can't Kisame love her!! Twitch
    This made my chest hurt and tears form in my eyes.
    I haven't read a story in such a long time that did that to me.
    Very good.

    Ohh, love the Orihime Inoue story layout btw
    March 13th, 2010 at 12:01am
  • aubs

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    I agree with Akira Suzuki. And I liked how someone likes Kisame, other than me. I mean, not that many people like him, he is a misunderstood Akatsuki member.

    I loved everything about this one-shot. Fantastic!
    March 5th, 2010 at 04:30am
  • youngbae.

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    I'm a sucker for good emotional stories, apparently.
    This was very well written, and I liked that it was Kisame. I liked that he knew his mission and that he stuck with it, going against his emotions.
    My favorite part was the ending. I though it was cute. tehe

    “It’s the only way,” he murmured, his breath mingling with hers. And even before she could protest, a small puff of smoke appeared before her own eyes, gone just as fast as it came. Devastated, she collapsed on her knees.

    “Liar.”


    Very well written Chan, as usual. Con Arms
    March 1st, 2010 at 03:28am
  • Moonlit Midnight

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    Have to say, the thought of anything kissing Kisame is a bit nauseating. BUT imagining him as Deidara makes it sooo much better; I liked it. Very good one-shot. Short, sweet and ever-so-slightly depressing.

    <3
    ~Kami
    March 1st, 2010 at 01:36am