Suffocate - Comments

Sound good keep up updated soon

This story - every single aspect of it - is so, so beautiful.

Update sooon? <33

lovelovelovelovelove <3

Love it ; update. :D

i loveeee this its so amazingggggg i love how liz came back as a vampire, you should have like the cullens kill her :)

its amazing so far

Oh snap, they were caught. O.O

WE NEED SOME ACTION RACHEL! :DD

Oh snap! Liz is a vampire? Wow. I wonder if her dad is going to hear everything that is going on upstairs, he will probably be pissed and have no idea that it was Liz which will just mean more issues for Sarah. Man just when things seem to be looking up for Sarah her boss might not give her a raise and her sister is a blood sucking vampire.
And just one thing I noticed in this part-

Police are investigating the murders of two local residents, Darlene Johnson, 34, and Chris Johnson, 18. Burbank and Johnson were reported missing on Saturday night after failing to arrive home the previous night.

You said 'Burbank and Johnson' when they both had the last name of Johnson, so I assume it was just a typo and wanted to let you know.

Cant wait for the next update!

YAY, update? xD

So, was she thrown out the window or something? o.O

I like this :) It's cute. You have a talent in writing.

New friend. <3

Teehee, Jake didn't notcie that Sarah was hit, or? D:

Update? xD

Man I am so happy I caught up on the sequal! This story is truly amazing and it is such a roller coaster. Every chapter I'm wondering what is going to happen and at the end of every chapter I'm left amazed and waiting for the next update. The whole miscarriage thing was so unexpected and I feel so bad for her but at least things are looking up....I suppose. She doesnt need to be around her dad anyway, he is a horrible person. I think she will be better off going to stay with Jacob cause I mean they are going to be getting married anyway so that will mean they will have to live together eventually! I am so happy she said yes to his proposal :) Can't wait for the next update!

Oh! Annddd, Fever, is an amazing song. (:

Oh, BTW, update please. xD

Oh HALE no. Her father hit her?! D:

What the fuck?!
Definitely had no idea that was going to happen.
Her dad is an ass

YAY! :D She said yes! Oh yeah oh yeah! xD

Update sooonnn.

Cute. <3 Update soon. ^_^

I'd totally feel the same way Sarah does if I had a miscarriage. D:

NOOOOOOOOOO!!! WTFUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!!! I am sad...so so so so sad...