I Want Her - Comments

It's been forever please update this!

really wish there was more this is a really good story. I have empathy so I can relate to some lengths! Please come back an write!!!!!!

I've never been a huge fan of vampire stories but yours is do well written that I think I might have to give more a try! I guess I owe some thanks to comment swap for bringing me to your story. I've never seen the show but you gave enough detail about the characters and places that I didn't feel lost at all.
I hope to read another update soon.

I hope you update soon :)

Comment swap brought me here. :)
I am not a big fan of vampire stories but I like this one. Your layout is easy on the eyes and the story is easy to read, which makes it more enjoyable for me.
I like the detail you put into this. It makes me feel like I am part of what is going on. I am really interested into what is to come next and now I am temped to even watch the show.
Keep up the good writing! :)

First off, I like your layout. The writing sticks out and pops which is great. But, just so you know, the image on the top of the pages doesn't work anymore. To be honest, I know nothing about True Blood, but this story has definitely gotten me interested. Just a few punctuation mistakes but overall it's great.

Whoa. I've only read 3 chapters so far, but I'm already hooked! I'm not familiar with True Bloods (I've never watched it before), but you've now made me very curious about it and want to go watch it :)
You have a very nice, easy to read writing style. Your sentences flow very smoothly and I found no spelling or grammatical errors, which makes me happy (it's a pet peeve of mine).
I wasn't planning on reading more than one chapter, but your story has intrigued me and now I want to read more. And I will. When I get the time. Life is too busy sometimes. Definitely subscribing so I can come back and read more when I find the time to :)

So, I hate you. Joking of course, but seriously! I had just gotten over my obsession of True Blood and then Comment Swap sends me here and just like wow this is amazing! I noticed a few spelling and grammar mistakes but your plot is good and I'm just in love with this and I hate you because I had just gotten over this!! Why would you do this to me?!

By the way, your banner image doesn't show up :/

By the way, your banner image doesn't show up :/

So, I hate you. Joking of course, but seriously! I had just gotten over my obsession of True Blood and then Comment Swap sends me here and just like wow this is amazing! I noticed a few spelling and grammar mistakes but your plot is good and I'm just in love with this and I hate you because I had just gotten over this!! Why would you do this to me?!

@ ShySwag
Omg, I meant True Blood not Vampire Diaries!

Comment Swap;

I'm in the middle of chapter three and I'm so into this story right now. I'm ignoring my phone just to continue to read this story. I even subscribed. At first, I thought I wasn't going to like this because I never watched Vampire Diaries, so I'm think I'm going to be really lost. But this story is very well detailed and interesting. I love how I'm writing this as I read. But so far, best story I read on here so far. It makes me just want to watch Vampire Diaries to see; but main point. I really like your writing style and details it flows in the story that makes me want to continue to read. You gave great skills in writing. Keep up the good work(:

Update!!!!!

This story equals awesomeness! :D

I'm so glad you updated again. Thank you!

loved the update!
PLEASE update when you can!!! :)

I love this :)

well this is midly active, so didn't expect there to be updates that often anyways xD

anyways, I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm thinking that this sexual tension between them will explode at some point and I don't know.. I haven't thought that long ahead xD

Good chapter and I can't wait to read more of this, whenever that is ^.^

Very nice. Loved the chapter. :)