Wow, the opening chapter was great. It gives that strong feeling of drifting into insanity which I really love. Not many writers are able to do that easily, or at least I don't see it all the time in zombie fics. I'm only on Chapter 1 and I plan on subscribing. You set up a great world in this story and I'm excited to see what you do with it. Keep up the good work
I really like your story :). It isn't one of those clichéd zombie stories where all that happens is killing, you really gave a good perspective of her view. I like that, keep it up!