The Scream Team - Comments

Wow. I just found your story randomly and I love it. I like the whole "wtf happened to them" thing you have us readers thinking. I know that this is a bit late...ahem...a couple years to be exact...but you should keep updating this. It is lovely!

Dunno, don't really care. Just hate the fact I have a shitload of lazy readers. x]] Hope you enjoyed it anyway.

am i the only oe that's commenting

Oh mah god I am so happy! You updated this story! I am too like excited and tired to even write a good review! But shit shsit, I ugh I am so confused and happy and so in love right now *huggles tightly* I am so glad you updated!

amazing :D :D

love it <3

Yes I am very very very happy <3 Though I would be more happy when Matt pushes Quinn against the wall and shows him what a latino man could do......>_> ^_^
I think the Frank and Gerard part was really cute though XD Gerard being so protective of the little Frank!
Eeee I don't know what to say! I think I have to update for you know XD

WOO!
Long update =D
This is really good.
& I can't belive Gerard works at a place like that.
It seems that Frank is feeling things towards Gerard? ;)
Maybe the feeling is mutual?
Haha, idk.
but awesome story.
I like how it focuses on everyone, instead of just one thing.
More when you can!
<3

Hahah, I love how we said 'weirdo'
It's such a...juvenille word :]
I really like this so far.
more soon?
<3

i like it <3

=D What a pleasent thing to wake up to. And wow, Quinn is 13? That's young! ^_^ I loved the last line of the story, just "weirdo" XD I don't know but it was funny to me lol. I missed this story so much, how it is slow paced but there's alot of shit going on. And the way it is written is so fucking greant ^-^ I am going to harass you for another update XD

i like it

You finally updated. I loved it. You have a very good writing style. I admire you.

YAY You updated! A beautiful update as always my dear. I loved the flow of it; how you jumped to the different perspectives without a stutter. The vaguness was good, by the way, I liked not knowing everything just yet!

PLus your writing style is aamazing!

This is just incredible.
I pretty much suck at leaving good story comments, but the description and vividness of the two chapters you have written are unbelievable (in a good way, obviously).
Yeah, like I said, I suck at leaving good story comments that are worth reading.
But anyway, more when you can<3 ^____^

...Wow. You don't even have two pages? With that kind of writing? Jesus... I forgot about this one. Sorry. Yours is still probably the best literature I've ever read. Keep it up! I'll try to comment more. Sorry.
-Erin

Okay, so here is my sucktastic review which I really don't think could ever give any justice to this story.

First off...:cheese: You are the most amazing writer. Every single sentence is so deep and meaninful. You must be a walking thesauras or something, and I say this because you seem to have the most perfect descriptive word for everything you want to say and express through the story.

The prologue was wonderfully written, and it was a dynamic start to the story. Although, as I continued to read into the next chapters I found that the prologue was now beginning to confuse me. Not for any bad reasons, but because all the other characters that you introduced in the other chapters were somehow intertwined with eachother, whereas Quinn was a soul character. But prologue's are usually different to the rest of the story, so I'm guessing he'll come into it later somehow.

Like I already said about how amazing your writing is, there is one sentence which stood out the most for me.
This place felt like quicksand and it seemed like only the lucky and the ignorant were getting out alive.
I have no idea why that line stood out so much, but it just did. It was just the most perfect way to end the prologue and I also think it helps set a mood for this story, and you have kept this constant kind of gloomy or intense mood throughout all the chapters so far.

I liked it. :)

Wow! Thanks for telling me you updated.[/sarcasm] This was a really good chapter. Really good discriptions, no spelling errors or grammar mistakes, so nothing bad about it. Of course I have a favorite part:

Mikey’s begging gaze followed him all the way home and while trying really hard not to make it obvious to the others in any way, his mind was working overtime imagining all the possible scenarios. Would the kid tell his big brother about his outburst and lack of affection towards him? Would Mikey tell him just how ruthless he sounded? Would he then conclude that he, his best friend didn’t care anymore?

That's kinda what I feel when I'm around my friends. That hit me hard. A lot of my friends don't care a lot about me so I kinda related to that paragraph. Can't wait for more!

I think i literally squealed when my email showed me you updated. Though I am confused, is Matt like the leader of a gang or something XD I don't know, it seemed like it. *giggles* I don't know where this story is going yet, but I can't wait to see what you do with this!

This is pretty good
I'd like to see where it's going.