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  • Fake your own death

    Fake your own death (200)

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    YAY! *huggles story* It's so pretty and written beautifully *kisses the story* I want to marry it ^.^
    November 5th, 2007 at 01:37am
  • Fueled By Dana

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    This is amazing!

    Perhaps it was the weather.

    But there were actually people on the streets. Weak sunlight shone up every menacing corner with its ailing yellow shine through the layers of the thick cloudy mask. A breath of life seemed to have graced this concrete lair of secrets and people and voices oozed from every opening, seemingly light-hearted and open, and the shadows cowered from the surge of light, no matter how diseased and weak it was.


    I could see this image in my head as I read it. It was so fucking beautiful. I almost cried when I saw the image. Keep it up.
    November 4th, 2007 at 11:06pm
  • xander Crews.

    xander Crews. (100)

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    wow, you're an amazing writer.
    i'm looking forward to this story.
    November 4th, 2007 at 06:53am
  • Fueled By Dana

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    This is really good. I can't wait to see where this is going to go. I popped your comment cherry! Whoo-hoo! Dance
    November 4th, 2007 at 06:47am