Through Your Lips - Comments

You're an amazing writer. That was fantastic

Wow, that was awesome, Tyson's a bang! :P lol

This is just so breath taking!
I love the emotion and how even on the eve of his wedding he's been with this other woman.
You portrayal of the characters was just so perfect; I felt really sorry for the fact they couldn't be together forever like she longed for them to be.

Great job :D