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  • drown her to sleep

    drown her to sleep (100)

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    You're an amazing writer. That was fantastic
    April 1st, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • Vod Kanockers

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    Wow, that was awesome, Tyson's a bang! :P lol
    March 17th, 2010 at 12:23am
  • The Color Abi

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    This is just so breath taking!
    I love the emotion and how even on the eve of his wedding he's been with this other woman.
    You portrayal of the characters was just so perfect; I felt really sorry for the fact they couldn't be together forever like she longed for them to be.

    Great job :D
    March 6th, 2010 at 03:48pm
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