My Half-Blood Prince - Comments

You should definitely turn this oneshot into a story. The ending was brilliant by leaving us hanging on what was to happen next. The cliff hanger was amazing, something I was not expecting to happen.

Woo! I'm glad it wasn't a romance. Weird right? Wrong. I don't think I could imagine Snape in love with anyone other than Lilly. I like how he still seems to regret it. Giving her to Voldemort, I feel like that's why he bowed his head. I dunno I could just be guessing.

it is really good u need to update i think this is amasing dont mind my spelling never good

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That was awesome.
It was so unexpected.

this was a lot different than I expected. Good job killing cliche!
This oneshot leaves us with many questions. Why does Voldemort want her? Why was she drawing Snape? Is there anything special about this Muggle?
It could definately be turned into a story. And bonus points for a nice, simple and clean layout ^^

I defiantly think if you wrote a story out of this it'd be amazing!
Please consider it.