The Spirit I Call Home - Comments

I have to admit I loved it.

It was defaintly one of the most unique takes in the contest. You really did have that twist to the paragraph, no one else quite matched that!
I adored it, and i don't know how much you know about native americans or the culture, but you definatly convienced me you're the expert on it!

It was a good length as well, which sounds a bit of a cop out comment, but comparedwith others you got the length of the one shot right. Also liked how the layout and colours, matched the story idea.

Awesome entry, Thank you for entering this contest.
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That was pretty awesome =]
great job i loved it

OMG! This has got to be the best one u have wrote yet! I absolutely love it. I love how u give reference to how the natives used stones and dream catchers. I have Crow Indian blood in me. I think u did an amzing job with this one shot. And I saw nothing that needed changing.