Well, I Feel That This Is an Explosion - Comments

awww i love the part where william was like " I'm not asking you to. I'm telling you to. " i thought
that was really sweet althoug i am kind of bummed how it ended with the whole
happily ever after thing but eh i guess it was ok.

your serious?
D:
awwwww, I love the end. too bad though....

thanks for the warning with the hiatus!! good luck :-D

yay william!!!! WOOOOOOOOOO

lovely update :D more soon it's been awhile
and Happy New Years Eve!

I think your filler is still terrific, even if it's JUST a filler....

thank you for that update! it was good =D

i like it XD

wow i seriouslly love this story its the best TAI story i've ever read
update soon this really makes my day after school =)

aww. poor william. even though hes not sad. i want them to be together

M-azing... I don't care if was short either. :D

I acutally found the sequel the other day, but hadn't gotten around to reading it. Sorry.

I just read it all then, it's really good. I do agree with XxmeesexX though, I got a little confused. You're a good writer otherwise.

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OMG mike that was unexpected i loved that! but i hope that her and william can work it out great update!

shit mike...

i really really did not expect that.

oh shit! crazyyyyyyyy stuff

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! I love this fic and want more updates!

Great update. :]
Please keep writing. This is a fantasic story.

I dunno what # of comment out of 5 this is, but I do hope it helps. I've read this story since the beginning and I still love it. Don't stop!!! You have awesome updates. One bad thing would probably that you're jumping around a lot in the sequel. They are terrific and your writing has me eager for the next update, but the way you jump around is sort of annoying how she's missing Will in one chapter, then she's with him, and now it's been TWO years and she's run away, he's pissed at her finally, and she's missing him again. Pull the next chapter out a bit and let the anticipation and love linger a bit, IF they even get back together. Otherwise, this is my favorite story to read lately. My other stories suck ass and they never seem to reach out for criticism. One of the best authors are the ones who want the criticism to become better, even if the readers know that it couldn't get any better. You are definitely one of those types of authors.

(this long enough of a comment for you? lol.) I've always wanted criticism on my stories. Maybe I should take a page outta your book and boycott writing until I get some responses. lol. Update soon, dude!

-Jenny

I love! more?

i really like this storyy.
don't stop writing it i would be sad D: