Confessions (The Insanity Project) - Comments

Oooh this is very intersting!!!!
You have some talent! xD

all I can really say is Hubba What? XD

Your writing style is very different; poetic and desciptive, I love it<3

The first chapter about Objects and how most people see only what's in front of them really hooked me for some reason. The whole idea is simply wondrous and I am most definately subscribing!! It's different than most stories I read, which was one of the reason probably why I find it so interesting. Please continue!!!!! :DD

I would have to agree with the others that the layout is hard to read. Light letters against a dark background hurt my eyes, so I had to switch to the default. This is really well written but completely difficult to follow. I like that the narrator sort of rambles at times, it makes everything more realistic. I can really tell that you've put a lot of thought and work into this story, and that's refreshing. Good luck with this!

the concept presented in the intro is simply enthralling, and i love the theme it takes on when the character falls into a self mediated, self instructing sort of dream. it's the sort of story that involves a lot of thought and i can tell you've put a lot of work into it. i love it.
great job!!!

Wow, I'm currently slightly speechless.
This, wow, it's amazing. Confusing, interesting, well written, able to keep my attention throughout it all.
I had to re-read some things, but that's all right. I like it when a story confuses me and makes re-read some stuff.
This is really amazing.

Intriguing, yes. :)

@JohnnyCash
Thanks for helping me out with that. I really needed that and I'll change it asap! >w<

One

Or their afraid
^^ they're

with anew
^^ a new

The same with anyone other then a person
^^ than

Two
Its funny that
^^ It's

then the actuality of falling
^^ than

moon lite it
^^ lit?

vibrated threw my bones
^^ through

took its tole by
^^ toll

anything more then how
^^ than

I lied my back
^^ doesn't sound right, but I'm not sure what else you'd put there.

was begged me to spare
^ begging

I though I really did fall into Wonderland
^^ thought

have gave me a fake one."
^^ given

suppose your right
^^ you're

a dull expression on
^^ on my face

guaranty
^^ guarantee

Ok,
^^ Okay

your a
^^ you're

before your
^^ you're

Three
them in site on
^^ insight

traditions threw stories
^^ through

care of they're little sisters
^^ their

in the ruff here
^^ rough

My skin is lighter then most
^^ than

that is were I
^^ where

thinks my mom's
^^ moms

were I
^^ where

something
^^ something's

of humor showing threw
^^ through

consciousness ring threw
^^ through

me more then realizing
^^ than

Four
floor pretty hard enough
^^ floor hard enough

since why I
^^ sense

place were I
^^ where

ending due supply
^^ dew

only think that
^^ thing

graze my
^^ grazed

pungent odor
^^ odour

I felt in urge
^^ an

threw the
^^ through

"If your not [i/]
^^ you're

Florescence
^^ Fluroescent - I think, may want to double check

Whoa, I am speechless because of the awesomeness. :D I can't wait for more. Though the background is kinda distracting. That's my only complaint though.

Holy whoa......that is all.