Still Life. - Comments

/read seventh chapter and eigth.

I already don't like her "savior". I don't know why, it's just me being biased and choosing to hate anyone on Clarissa's team.

I like Rebecca's pet peeve with unevenness. It gives her character more charisma, I think.

YES XDDD. I agree.

Ohhhhhhhh, gotcha. XD
Like Romeo and Juliet, except for that stupid misunderstanding leading them to both off themselves.
Dummies.

No no no no no no. I mean like, she like.. Makes her pulse slow down and shit? Like they did on this show Dollhouse. (I miss that show.) D: D: D: D:D :D :D:DASDIOL: anyway yeah
:3 idk
I'm just brainstormin'.
:D
And so yeah thanks ;D

/suscribed
And
LOL, fake a death? They sometimes do an autopsy or check FOR certain that the person is dead. Maybe have her in the act of a death where they can't find her body so they consider her dead.
Falling off cliff, drowning, car accident, burning building, ect, ect.

LOL I KNOW I NEED TO WRITE IT.
And we'll see. I have a plan
muahaha
/RubsChinEvily.
:3 I was thinking you know, that Rebecca would escape and run to Canada- stage a suicide or something. Like you know, she made herself passout and stuff and they think she killed herself so when taking her to the morgue- she escapes and hitchhikes to Canada to her aunt ;D
You should subscribe, 'cause I may not remember to tell you I finished it.

/read sixth chapter.
LOL, Santa.
Yup, so far, so good. I'd like for her to actually succeed in killing Clarissa just because I'm sick like that and it'd be a twist in the story.
;D
So that means you needs to post that last chapter, cuz.

LOL IKR?
I'M INLOVE WITH REBECCA. And Clarissa- yeah, she's spoiled ;D Rebecca can be an attention whore. c:
I'm glad you likeee it so far.
I posted the sixth chapter just tonight, so, yeah. I finished it tonight, too.

/read fourth and fifth chapter
For some reason I like Rebecca's character more than I do Clarissa's. At least she has some kind of charisma to her character, Clarissa just seems like a spoiled little girl. I know Rebecca is a attention whore (LOL) but this chick thinks she can break out of juvy? I'd like to see that.

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL yeah I haven't even edited it hardly at all. I just posted it 'cause I liked where it was going. I'll edit later. ;D

/read third chapter (I like how they're not long and don't drag, kudos to you)
you kept saying "loosing" when it's "losing".
And for some reason I LOL'd when her mother went "That's not my baby, my baby is filled with life!" That's so what a black mother would say.
Loooool.

LOL ;D I know. I love writing for her. Its so much fun. x]

/read second chapter
Yeah, she's a crazy bitch.

LOL THEY'RE SUPPOSE TO BE CHOPPY
I can never not write like that. :3
And WHAT GAVE YOU THAT CLUE? ;D

/read first chapter
Damn man! You're better at specifics than me by far (actually everyone is).
It's interesting so far. The sentences are a little choppy, especially toward the end, but I can overlook that. Rebecca. She's one crazy bitch, eh?
XDDD

LOL OH SHIT THANKS BOOB.
XD

/in the middle of reading characters
LOL, you know you have her mother labeled a male?
Just thought I'd point that out.
:}

Wow....can't find words....to amazesed

Emily May if you don't pursue this I will personally hunt you down until I find out what happened between Rebecca and Clarissa.

Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it.