i have to say that this story is hands down my favourite on this site. i never meant to read it but i did and im so glad....i love how its panning out and confusing me all at the same time....please update soon!!!!!!
DAMN! I just read the entire story (well, what you have so far) and I'm just like....damn. This is crazy! And creepy. But I like it. I'm not the biggest fan of scary stories or scary movies and the picture of the girl scares the crap out of me and the part that said "Go kill yourselves" made me almost want to cry but I couldn't stop reading. Oh, man. You are talented. Scary talented but, still, talented.
Newest chapters made me laugh. Shelby...what a perfect character. The writing is definitely improving and the dialogue's just getting better and better. I'm really liking how you haven't made Matthew all 'sensitive' half way through, like so many authors do. He's such a smartass people can relate to. Keep it up :)