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  • NerdAlert!

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    I love it i have to keep checking back often hoping you updated
    March 22nd, 2010 at 10:09pm
  • Chocomaro

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    D'awww, thanks. I must say, these comments complete me.
    /swoon
    =3
    March 16th, 2010 at 06:02am
  • tropical remix

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    Amazing. The story has much suspense , but still carries a romaticish feel to it. :)
    March 16th, 2010 at 05:55am
  • Hayleyniicole

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    i have to say that this story is hands down my favourite on this site. i never meant to read it but i did and im so glad....i love how its panning out and confusing me all at the same time....please update soon!!!!!!
    March 16th, 2010 at 01:19am
  • Chocomaro

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    That comment just made my day.
    Thank you.
    =3
    March 15th, 2010 at 08:47pm
  • gravity_09

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    DAMN!
    I just read the entire story (well, what you have so far) and I'm just like....damn.
    This is crazy!
    And creepy.
    But I like it.
    I'm not the biggest fan of scary stories or scary movies and the picture of the girl scares the crap out of me and the part that said "Go kill yourselves" made me almost want to cry but I couldn't stop reading.
    Oh, man. You are talented. Scary talented but, still, talented.

    *subscribes*
    March 15th, 2010 at 08:20pm
  • Chocomaro

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    ='']
    March 15th, 2010 at 06:55pm
  • Goodbye.....

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    I loveeeeeee this story!!
    *subscribes*
    March 15th, 2010 at 08:54am
  • Chocomaro

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    LOL, oh sorry. Your theme scares me, btw.
    o-o
    March 15th, 2010 at 07:19am
  • J. Third

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    GAH! You changed the layout on me! It scared me...
    Anyway, back to reading!
    March 15th, 2010 at 07:18am
  • Chocomaro

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    Thanks. I wanted my characters to be like no other. I'm glad you enjoy.
    March 12th, 2010 at 05:14am
  • Elephant PJs

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    Newest chapters made me laugh. Shelby...what a perfect character.
    The writing is definitely improving and the dialogue's just getting better and better. I'm really liking how you haven't made Matthew all 'sensitive' half way through, like so many authors do. He's such a smartass people can relate to. Keep it up :)
    March 12th, 2010 at 01:48am
  • Chocomaro

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    XDDD
    Thanks for the comment review.
    March 12th, 2010 at 01:37am
  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    new chapters r awsome. I wish Ava would have punched Shelby in the face tho
    March 11th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • Chocomaro

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    Oh thanks.
    XD
    March 11th, 2010 at 01:00am
  • kamikasey

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    Woah son.

    I really, really like it!

    :D
    March 11th, 2010 at 12:23am
  • Chocomaro

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    Oh and I think I'm getting a little bit better in the later chapters.
    I dee kay.
    March 11th, 2010 at 12:09am
  • Chocomaro

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    XDD
    Thanks.
    March 9th, 2010 at 11:09pm
  • BoysAreHeartBreakers

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    Love the new chapters
    March 9th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • Chocomaro

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    Best comment ever.
    XD
    Thank you.
    March 7th, 2010 at 07:35am