The Path - Comments

thanks for the update

OMG I have some ideas...but I don't wanna say it. cos I wanna read more to find it out. this could be lead some drama... and please write more for a chapter...please?

very intriguing. subscribed

this story has really great potential. I like it a lot =)
You said English isn't your native language? You write pretty well though, given the fact. If you're iffy about your grammar and stuff, I could help you edit if you like? if you're interested i'll give you my email or whatever. Great job love! I hope to see more!

i like this story please keep going <3

very interesting...keep going, I would like to read more about this story...why she has dreams and why she feels like that...

This is really good, it's a great start and you should definitely continue :)

I like it so far. Obviously its just the beginning and theres not much to go on but it sound mysterious and I like it.

I was and still am a bit confused myself. And you are very welcome:)

Well that was quick :)
I'm glad you liked it, I'm still trying to figure out how does Mibba works, I'm a little confused.
Tomorrow I'll probably put another chapter. ^^
***Thank you***

The beggining is nice. Waiting for more.